The first time I read this fanfic (On dA), I found it sad. It's very well written.

I like how you've described everyone in the class, teachers and the students.

I feel so sorry for everyone (students?), how they died... And how Jonouchi lost Anzu, and ended up dieing, too.

And for Yugi, it must be too sad for him to lose his friends.

it really sad.

i like how you described how Jonouchi, Anzu, Honda, Miho, Hanasaki and the teachers looked liked.

and i liked how you wrote what Anzu saw before she died.

it makes it more sad that Anzu died in Jonouchi's lap