I love it... though I wish you had made it into a story..

Tif/Vin are my favorite couple and I really like the way you write so I would love it if you could continue this story.

I also like the way you write Yuffie and Reno. I'm going to be watching for more from you.
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One word: masterful. Your prose is to kill for; I highly doubt there is one superfluous sentence in that entire chapter. Nothing is rushed, the emotions are realistic and you Vincent to the T ... I could literally imagine the conversation taking place between him and Tifa. Amazing.

QOTRS~*~

ps- And I wish you luck on that novel you have been planning to undertake!