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| chrono-contract 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseit was cute |
| Tetsuo ;) 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story, very well written. I especially enjoyed the flash back of Sasuke's mother, gives you a view into Sasuke's mind that almost scares you and feel his pain. the rest was um.. heh... very descriptive lol all in all gret job, keep it up. -Tetsuo |
| Crls Nyino 2007-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so cute! GO MIKOTO! (I always liked her better then Fugaku) |
| B-chan 2007-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love your story!I'v read many Itachixsasuke fics but your is the only one I like so far! Keep righting and I hope to read more of your work soon! |
| stella 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story |
| threeBOWLSofRAMEN 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abusei think it was cute in a itachi-sasuke way ya thats it in a itachi-sasuke way from me: VEE |
| Anni 2007-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseohh how cute. I really like your style of writing, and the image of sasuke's and itachi's (dead) mother talking to them is quite a nice possibility to express their emotions. But at/in (sorry don't know which one i should use) the end, it might be better to explain itachi's feelings more to fully understand their actions. I love this fanfic, keep up your work |
| XxKayxKayxX 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseaw so kawaii |