Wow... that was one long oneshot. But I enjoyed it a lot xD

I'm glad Roxas told Namine the truth. It wouldn't do anything good to hide and lie to her right to the very end right? Though I still feel bad that they didn't part on good terms. Then again...that's life. If Namine had forgiven Roxas right there and then...ugh, it would feel so fake.
Haha! First time in a long time I read a story about a girl PUNCHING instead of just SLAPPING. Awesomeness xD
You did really well with the break up scene. I really liked the stages Namine went through: Denial, Anger, Depression. She wanted so badly to pretend things were still okay. She couldn't control her anger and slapped Roxas. Then, she just... breaks down. It felt pretty realistic to me. It's also a breathe of fresh air that Namine didn't mindlessly swear at Roxas. She doesn't seem like the type to curse often anyways. Even without them, her words were still strong and you KNEW she was angry.
So yeah, good work =)

Yeah, I have to agree with Roxas. How the heck did Axel fall in love with him so quickly? And how the heck did Roxas return his feelings too? It wasn't bad per say, it just felt rushed.

Roxas' breakdown when he gets to Axel's place was done really well too.
I also enjoyed the sad, serious moments between Roxas and Axel. Like the time when Roxas brought Axel to his house. Or when Axel gave Roxas his number.
“It doesn’t mean anything,” he muttered. “I don’t really have any friends around here and I like you, so yeah… Just call me sometime so we can hang out or something.” Please, his eyes finished silently.
THAT line really got to me. Especially that please part.

But yeah, really enjoyed the story, nice work! =)

This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. I'm not even kidding. I fell in love with it. You did an amazing job, and you created such a moving story. I found myself really connecting with the characters. It was truly amazing. Thank you so much for writing this!

Akuroku forever!

This was an absolutely amazing story. It's going into my all-time faves, obviously. Such good word choice and flow, and then the plot...I was blown away. Good job on everything. I'm absolutely amazed, and I hope to read more of your work.

that was such a good story! i thought the lemons were sexy.:3 it was sweet,sexy,dramatic, and beautiful.:) great job!

Precious story. (:
I enjoyed reading it a few times over.

Wow...this was really good...it's definitely going into my favorites!

Wow this fic was rec'd to me as the best Axel/Roxas fic ever and I do have to agree!

I loved this so much!!

Man, this story was so beautifully written. D: I loved every word of it! The emotion in it was just so overwhelming and heart-warming and wonderful. Everything was just brilliant. Kudos to the great story.

This fic is amazing


it is so god

don't ever stop writing...you are amazing!

Amazing story! Very beautiful and realistic. I haven't seen many stories that truely make me think about real life, and living like that. It was so real. It was like something that would happen in someones life told in the way a person would write a memoir. Amazing job! Keep writing amazing stories like this one.

Many thanks,
~Kriss

Is charming the right word? Charming is my default when I can't come up with a better adjective, but charming doesn't quite describe this.
The story is intense, for sure. You have a way of catching your readers up in a flow of words that, while straightforward and calm, still convey the emotion you want them to. I was very impressed by this story, and enjoyed reading it quite a bit.
I have never read an akuroku story from first-person. third-person limited, sure, and that usually works best. I can't really see this story from third limited, though. The choice of perspective was excellent.
I think it would be interesting to see the same story from Axel's perspective.
LA

this was really beautiful
... of course when i was done reading i went and downloaded the walk... perfect choice
so yessum, i loved it!! fantastic work
-izzie

Ooh really nice, even though it took me several days to read it..I-I've been busy and stuff!.. Yeah.
I enjoyed how it wasn't too explicit.
And the song is great, I'm listening to it just now:)
Anyway, it was a really nice fic, I think.

LOVED IT XD I Think RoxasxAxel Are So The Cutest Couple Ever!
REAL GOOD XD Namine Sucks Anyway XD

Wow! This was soo HOT! Loved every bit of it!