 allPod 2009-09-28 . chapter 8Wow. This has been pretty intense.
lol @ slutty Allen. Mighty hot if you ask me.
Damn, Kanda freaks out too much. Poor Allen. :( But I think you protrayed them quite well.
Ahaha. A slap. Kanda deserves that and more. Should've had Lenalee kick him in his balls.
Ty for such a nice fic. Can't wait to see more. |
 Kaitlin 2009-09-26 . chapter 8 Hey hey I know you're busy with school or something but it's mean to leave us hanging. ;-; I like your writing style and I'm very interested to see where this story is going and how it ties Allen and Kanda together (besides the obvious sex thing >_>) so pwease update soons? =D Well, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. xD Thanks! |
 Princess of Oblivion 2009-09-24 . chapter 8Gee, Allen really is a freaking saint. But that's just what he is. And Allen's a sweetie like that.
But now I'm wondering how Allen and Kanda are going to cross paths again--and I'll definitely be reading on to see how that happens! |
 beautiful000enigma 2009-09-23 . chapter 8Love it so far! Like Kanda's and Allen's twisted little world.
smh @ Kanda: Kanda, Kanda, Kand. Should really learn to control your temper, you almost killed the moyashi!
^_^
ps. I love Lavi, like always |
 Animegoil 2009-09-22 . chapter 9oh shit. you screwed up big time! |
 oztan 2009-09-22 . chapter 8I wonder if Lavi is going to find out what happen at the brothel and who side will he defend, Lenalee and Allen or Kanda?
I feel sorry for Kanda the way Allen baited him and Lenalee close minded and refusing to hear anything else. |
 Lord Makura 2009-09-19 . chapter 8Aw...Allen, always so selfless...
Well he got to be, if he want to be with Kanda... heh..heh... |
 MitarashiiDango 2009-09-18 . chapter 8wow. it's been a while since the last update hasn't it?
well it has been to me =.=
tyki tyki tyki~ where has he disappeared off to now?
bah. didn't see much of allen...
shall wait for the next chapter.
UPDATE! |
 Ritzs 2009-09-14 . chapter 783
I loves this.
You do plan to update sometime, right? 8D? |
 Lord Makura 2009-09-11 . chapter 7Wow... This story is awesome!! I can't wait for an update to know about Kanda's past! *alert* |
 Michi P. 2009-07-31 . chapter 7And once again you stun me with amazingness. Great great story, you characterize so well it hurts. In a good way :). Can't wait for more, good luck writing!
~Michi P. |
 Ribbonseal 2009-07-11 . chapter 7I lyk this story Prositute!Allen is a rather different sort of persona ive seen people make Allen into |
 Meyham 2009-06-19 . chapter 7I usually don't like really AU stories, but this one is very creative and original. I had to look up what an arbiter was, though! On that note, excellent vocabulary here. Good grammar, too, although you have 'cartoon' instead of 'carton' in chapter 1. Please update again soon! |
 Kaitlin 2009-06-19 . chapter 7 Oh please don't forget Allen. xD I really wanna know why he's prostituting himself in the first place. And there's so many unanswered questions I'm crying a little inside. I do really like your characterization of Lenalee though. I'd kinda forgotten how much I liked her, and reading ffs sometimes people portray her in weird ways, as really plain and lacking in personality. Which I guess she might be compared to the other strong personalities, but re-reading the manga (please stop with the hiatus already!! ;-;) I remembered just what a strong person she really is, and wanting to protect her friends might be cliched but I think it makes her real and a strong female character that's not about sex appeal, although I guess all of Hoshino's women are so good job Hoshino! Takes a woman to write a woman when it comes to shounen. xD Also, moving on, I just found this story so I didn't notice before but, it's almost two years old! I don't wanna be irritating, but that's a long time for only seven chapters. If you could update soons I would love you forevers. ;-; Soes I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, love your style and the fact that I've had to double check words in the dictionary, and THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR KNOWING PROPER GRAMMAR. A good story can be ruined by abuse of the english language. So keep up the good work and thanks! |
 Kaitlin 2009-06-19 . chapter 6 Hi hi! I was gonna wait 'til the last chapter posted to review, but I had to say some stuff. First of all, because Allen said he wanted to see Kanda again, I've had that Miley Cyrus song stuck in my head the past few chapters and it's so distracting! xD Also, I'm really surprised that Daisya's been in a lot of fics I've been reading lately. Which is fine with me, I really like him even though he wasn't around for very long. I'm just surprised he's so popular. Also, while he and Allen never met (at least not that was shown) I feel like they woulda gotten along really well if they had, in a slightly annoyed Lavi-esque kinda way, so good job with that. I really like where this story is headed, and yar, boo on Kanda for strangling people! Ohs also, the whole Arbiter thing is a stroke of genius, it suits the bookmen in a more practical, real world kinda way. But everytime I see that word I think of my beloved Arbiter from Halo. xD Anyway, gonna keep reading now, so thanks. <3 |