XD!! THAT.*gasps for breath* WAS*gasp* HILARIOUS! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *guts burst*

OMG! What a commotion! It was wrapped up nicely and everthing. Like it!

nice job. keep writing!

funny

i love it!

This just made me laugh. 'The suspect was not aprehended, but Bunpei is distraught from his encouner"HE! HE IS NOT HUMAN! HE IS A DEMON, A DEMON!" Bunpei said being loaded on ambulance from a stretcher.' That part made me laugh hardest. Awesome story!