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| mabelreid 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseOkay that was just disgusting! My favorite lines this time were: But let me see what I can do because I apparently have no concept of acceptable food combinations.” “I swear, I’ll go to church every Sunday. But I – Jalapenos and syrup? C’mon, that’s just wrong.” “Okay, sweetie, that’s – Well, it’s more disgusting than a crime scene.” Lindsay turned to go, but stopped before she hit the tape cordoning off the area. Over her shoulder, she called, “Oh, and Don? Quit staring at my boobs.” LOL you have a gift for comedy. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseEW!! That is just gross.. Loved this... Wonder what Danny would think if he caught Flack looking at her boobs... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHehe! That was funny lol I loved it. I loved the last line too lol great work |
| serenity2bliss 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is just too cute! I love reading stuff when they are just beaing laid-back and domestical with each other ;) |
| TBD 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Loved the last line: “Oh, and Don? Quit staring at my boobs.” Hope to read more. |
| daytimedrama 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseSo cute and funny!! I love how Danny gets out of watchign her eat that at 4 in the morning, eww jalapenos and syrup I bet Flack would do the disgusted look like he did during the DL bug dinner scene. Excellent! More more!! ;) |
| ReJo 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseDo pregnant women really have cravings like that? Yuck! That was funny, especially “Oh, and Don? Quit staring at my boobs.” |