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| Effanineffable 2008-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis story made me cry. It is beautifully written and the sentiment is completely heartfelt. It felt so realistic. This idea of Dennis and George bonding over Colin and Fred's deaths is such a great one. I never even thought of the parallel between them until reading this, I regret to say. Absolutely phenomenal story. ~Effie :) |
| Aqua Mage 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Was thinking about writing something like this myself, but you did it much better than I could. Great fic. |
| Hamilcar 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseA nicely done portrait of the post-DH difficulties of some of the more minor characters like the Creevies. :) Well done, bringing in George and creating a realistic story about their grief. |
| avalon-usagi 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseDamn it, now I'm crying again. T_T Really, really awesome fic. I think you captured the characters perfectly. |
| Silmelinwen 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThe most beautiful story I've read in a while. Fred, Colin... and Snape (though he's not relevant in this case) were the deaths that hit me the hardest. Nobody seems to understand why Colin's death upset me so much... it's because it shows how many people that weren't as famous, or known, or skilled, died in the battle. |
| Magenta Lives 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely wonderful. Favorited. |
| link55 2007-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was such a beautiful fic. Sad but beautiful nevertheless. I never thought about George and Dennis understood each other. I love how you write their characters and the connection they both shared. War is a terrible thing. |
| justawritier 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseamazing. so heartbreaking. wonderfully done. |
| Kellybee 2007-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story made me cry more than the actual DH book did! I simply could not believe that Fred died, but I didn't even think about poor Colin Creevey's little brother. This was beautiful, and I really love the idea of George reaching out to Dennis to share and deal with their grief. Well done! |
| lyin' 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseoh, so sad. a fresh idea of a bond post-dh. poor George, his tight smile here slayed me. and excellent incorporation of Wood. I was so glad to see him show and NOT get killed with some throwaway line, his carrying Colin in was heart-breaking. well-done, thanks. :( |
| mobiles give you cancer 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWhen reading DH, I thought of Colins death as not a big deal, compared to deaths of Fred, Snape, etc. Reading this, made me realized how wrong I had been. Great job. |
| wicherwill 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseBecause we only hear things from Harry's head, we don't get moments like this. I honestly felt sadder after this than I did after reading the book. Great job. |