darling. to start out w/ turning her and to still make the story work is amazing.(well to me it is...). can't wait to read your other stories.

ur amazing...i heart u darling...lol...very good very good...

lol...this is why im hot...lol...

that was so Fucking awsome

I mean seriously

I loved it

Lik I said before, sorry. Now this review really is for you, this is such a sweet story. Aw, Charlie died obly a few years later, that is sad.

This should be interesting, Elena (I assume it's Elena) and Reno in the same house while Reno is drunk? Not good. Please continue.

swet! haha i loved it, especially the way you ended it. i guess somethings never change. adorable.

wqw, that was a little fast.

reminded me a bit of a red bull comercial, our love gives me wings.. i still like it thought.

Thats kinda weird...all of the sudden she's just like...sobbing. You need some intro to the story, not just 'OMGEDWARD! YOU DON'T WANT ME?' -sob- And then everything's find. o.0

Very good.

cool. veary nice story! loved it.

That was a great story. Im sad that its over.

haha I think thats funny. Mike liked her and then his son liked her... hahaha I bet edward wouldnt like that!

it was awsome!