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i just love this story so much!!

Hi:)
I just finished your whole story in 1 day and i loved it!
It was soo addicting i couldnt look away bc i needed to see what happens next!
:D
I cant wait til you write the next chapter bc i love the story and seeing how the characters develop.

Keep up the good work!

xoxo

would love to read more!

This stiry is so good please update soon!

Hehe. Ryuu is such a kawaii kiddie!

please upload soon!

Someone out there loves me, a story with all little boys after months, over a year plus, of reading stories with only girls. It's nice.

A bit of criticism, you have a lot of little grammar mistakes here and there. You should see if you can find someone to look over the chapter, find some of the mistakes you might miss.

Forgot to mention on the 19 ch review
how i adore Kouta having Shohei as his male admirer,
i was kind of scared there was
going to be straightness, well
not really scared but just skeptical
of how things were going to turn
out with Ayoko??
or whoever?? haha
I love Sai's character and i think this is hot
hahhaa

I wish Kouta and Ryuu got along,
Kouta was soo cute as a baby :)
and still is but just a lil rough

Hm, in the middle of story I thought you needed one hhaa
but as the story went on, more characters came out of now where and parents had like 3 kids at once and i remember in
the chappie Hataru came, there was like 3 kids beginning with the letter H, it was so confusing at first to know who was Hataru who was Lees and Sakuras kids hahha, that stuff haha

haha, im glad u have this chart
because all i really know is
Ryuu,Dachi, Hataru, Itsuki, Inou, Kouta... pretty much it
and also Ayoko because Kouta liked her as a baby?? hahha and
Shohei, because i wouldnt forget Sai's son ahhaha.

Itsuki, Inou...
at first i was hoping for more Ryuu action
but i find Itsuki is not a bad character
at all.
He is kind of submissive and
his love story is quite painful
to read
but i cant help but like it
not the hurt feelings part
but where the part how i feel hurt too
hahah

i feel ur pain Itsuki :D i feel it!!

Gahh omg. I love this story so much.
Watching Ryuu grow up so amazing.
Its so exciting, your brilliant.
With your description and everything on Ryuu
i want to attack Ryuu too ahhaa
seems fun, reading this story is fun!
Everyones pervertedness is delicious,
and Ryuu's innocence is great.
I never knew how much I would like an OC
so much, i never knew what i got into
when i clicked this story i just thought
it was just going to be about SasuNaru and be totally
unoriginal but something to pass the time with
but it has been so much more and it beens like a frikkin journey and i think only talented authors can do that ahha
i mean really this is awesome.
I totally am falling in love with Ryuu!
Daichi and Hataru and Ryuu,
love it, love how in the beginning Daichi loved Ryuu
i love Ryuu's past, and i love his personality
and i love how you include the original characters into
your OC's by them all having their traits and personality
its quite clever way to make 1 fellow reader love and
recognize each character hhaha
Gaara is awesome.
hahaha :D +Huggles you+ ur awesome

...so what u are saying is Sasuke ignores his son, Kouta, on purpose?...how rude...

thanks for the oc info. now i know who ryuu's boyfriend is. i wonder who his parents are... oh well. please update soon. i'm looking forward to it ^_^

glad to know your alive!