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47-Harm
Kiss after kiss over each bruise and red mark on his skin, Kaoru whimpering with each touch and memory, and silently Kyouya vows he will kill Hikaru.


What happened there?! Was that a twincest thing or did Hikaru beat Kaoru? How sad!

But I really love fictions written like this. I started to try to write one, but found it to be really hard to come up with random sentences like that. I have a deep respect for people who can write these things. Maybe I'll go try again.

I love the running notebook theme.
What does he actually write in that damn notebook?
Love it.

This is beautiful. Short and sweet. I'm not a fan of this pairing but I enjoyed it so much. It made my day. Thanks. Hope to see more of such from you soon :) Cheers!

...that was great, nay, AWESOME. =D

Aw, more 50 sentence drabbles. I love these. You write them so well.

Beautifully written and expressed. Please write more,

I don't understand why you're not really happy with this, it was excellent. :) Kyouya and Kaoru are definatly very sexy together and I loved each and every one of your sentences. My favorite though was the last since Kyouya finally chose Kaoru over his notebook. I'll have to say though, "Harm" made me sad since Hikaru was an asshole. Everything else makes up for it though.

But yeah, great job. Well written. Loved it.

OMG!
Fave!!

That was god!! I read it about 3 times before and I LOVE it...^.^

Lovely. I like how just fifty sentences explain it so thoroughly.

Just because those sentences are just too friggin awesome- *clicks favorites* *sigh* You might actually make me consider liking Kyouya and Kaoru... XP Which isn't so bad, eh?

~ Val

Very nice and in-depth collection of sentences. It really reflects on their relationship as it should, though sometimes the time periods of where they aresaying these things confuse me. Good job

I´m actually not such a fan of the pairing. But this fic made me think about how the actually fit perfectly. I loved this fic and I hope you write some more! Thank you!