Please continue...

Interesting fic

Please update. I hope Zuko finds the Gaang.

I love this fanfic! The idea of Zuko loosing his eyesight is new to me, I mean I haven't read any fics where that would've been used. Actually, in first two chapters I thought that you had made Zuko lose his memory!

Personally, I'm Zutara fan, but everything else than Kataang, Tokka or Maiko are fine by me. (well, Maiko not as strongly, but it isn't that good in my opinion)

Was this Ursa's voice? Please update.

You know, you have a bad habit of killing off the people I like: first Kioko, then Sokka, now Iroh? And you blinded Zuko? I don't know if I can handle all this angst...

Nice to see you're starting another Book 3, and this one looks like it's going to be the polar opposite of the first, in terms of darkness. I can't wait for the next chapter when hopefully we can find out who the mystery speaker is. I also wonder when, where, and how Zuko's going to meet up with the Gaang ('cause that's gotta happen at some point. Nonnegotiable.) At least Zuko will be able to relate on another level with Toph...

that was intense tho i hope iro didn't bit the big one. must read the rest please cont.

Oh wow. This is dark. I like it a lot. And I'm listening to the POTC AWE soundtrack. It really adds to it. Iroh died. SO sad. Please continue. Zuko blinded. Can't really form large sentences right now. But very nice. Enjoyable.

wow, while i cant really say im an avatar fan (i was reffered to your writing), i can say that i know a bit about writing, and this is written beautifully. yay for run on sentances. but oh well. i'll be keeping up with this story, so please write more! who knows, maybe you'll even get me into the avatar world :)

P.S. I know it sounds corny, not to mention random, but I hope you're having a good day. and if you arent, cheer up :) it'll all be okay.

Good start. I like it. Wish it was longer but oh well, update when you can!

Another Book 3 fanfic. Cool.