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Reviews for: I've Always Felt Alone
zule bean
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
I can't take it, your writtings are wonderful!
Calliope - Muse of epic poetry
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
Another beautiful text.

Calliope
cecelle
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
Young in the face of death...

I love that line.

He was so scared - and he's barely lived a quarter of the years he should have.

But at least he wasn't alone -- literally millions of us were there with him -- and we'll make sure he gets taken care of well from now on. ;-)
SilviaLaura
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
That's beautiful. Let's hope he had many moment when he felt less alone than at the end of his life.
squeaker19450
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
very, very sad. But we all love him so much and the stories like yours help us so much. Thanks...barb
wynnleaf
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
You have such a beautiful and poignant style of writing and it does so well in this context.

"and so I’m going on, beyond the end."

Sad and lovely at once.
excessivelyperky
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
Yes! To me, she has given up her right to this character by treating him so shabbily and making him so alone. I'm preparing a new universe just for him (ok, I'm going to torture him too, but at least he's going to be the hero...).

Excellent essay/story.
ippogrifo
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
Thanks.
You have given to Severus the deserved honour.
And the voice.
We all were prepared at his death but not in this way.
Eeven if in our hearts we hoped that she found a way to gain for herself immortality, writing a touching AND happy end. Instead she chose to be conventional and conformist and she decided to write following the usual rules: a painful and (for us) unforgettable death for the sinner and the hero going alone to defeat the enemy. She chose the easy way against what is right.
I am really grateful that you give him that love that she never meant to dedicate, denying even the dignity of a public acknowledgement.
In your last fic you quoted a sentence of S. King referring to the life of characters beyond the end of the book. Even if he is dead, Severus Snape will survive in our hearts forever, on the contrary of the characters still alive.
Thanks again. Love.
duj
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
We wished him a better end than she gave him ... but then, we wished him a better everything than she gave him.
BellaVendetta
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
...wow...
Severus-- *sigh*

Beautifully written, poignantly sad~
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