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| SwissMiss1 2007-11-11 ch 1,  | abuseHi, Just found this! Cool to find another BallyK fan. I am interested in seeing more of your story. Some suggestions, though: 1. Spellcheck. There are a lot of misspelled words in your story that could easily be fixed. 2. Get a beta reader. Find someone you know who knows about punctuation to help you with apostrophes, commas, dialogue formatting, etc. There are a lot of mistakes with punctuation in your story, that makes it kind of hard to read. |