Just wanted you to know that because of The Velvet Red I became addicted to ff, a long time ago. It`s still one of the best I`ve read so far, despite the fact I`m a jean/logan fan. Congrats!

I knew that Warren had killed Betsy. I wonder why Emma killed Warren. At least there is somewhat of a happily ever after. Keep up the good work.

Great story. Felt like I was reading a crime drama or something. It kept me very interested, and the characters were used very well. Keep up the good work.

i agree with both 'wow', and 'stormfreak'.
yea, it was unrealistic that storm would be able to heal so fast. it was obvious you were angry 'stormfreak', it was leaking out've your comment.
But i think you went WAY too far, you pretty much accused 'broadway' of being racist, when your the one who sounds racist. your comments were hurtful and innapropriate. no wonder she didn't respond to your email. noone should be talked to like that!
i think 'broadway' made storm kind of a ho, but who wasn't in this story? they were STRIPPERS. not saints.
there were numerous times in the story when storm was called a goddess, and portrayed beautifully, because only ororo would be strong enough to get over being violated, and soilder on.
another thing that freaked me out, was that after you said all those rude things, u ended ur comment with: answer my email. (hugs)
thats not normal. get help,get some manners, and take a chill pill.

one of favorite stories, but could've used a bit more ROMY.

i knew that warren jerk was up to no good!
it's too bad betsy had to be the victom of his sick mind.

a suggestion: maybe you should've had a longer healing period for rogue. she's not the most secure person in the world, and i think it'd would've taken longer for her to trust remy again, even tho it wasn't his fault

i guess i sorta knew...
but god remy, how could you do that to rogue?

i'm dying to know who killed Betsy...and dying to know what the police will do with remy...
and dying to know when that SOB warren is gonna get his!

Nice story but what happened to Emma?

This story has truly got to be the greatest Fan Fiction I have ever read. You are a gifted author. This story was unique the way everything came to gether in the end almost reminded me of a ten little indians type ending but it was beautiful non the less.

Loved it. Good work.

I KNEW IT! *goes over to nameless person* I TOLD YOU SO! Evil Warren! He did it! He did!

Woah! Its not really Remy, is it? I bet Warren killed Betsy or something... and Warren said that Remy was more trouble than he's worth! Oh, the drama!

Great story! But I expected nothing less! All your stories are superb! The ending came a bit quick but it was still very well done! Jean and Scott Forever! Is there a reason why either Jean or Scott are always married in your stories(Gloss)? Lol it makes the story more interesting! Great stories hope you write many more

o.o wHAH yOU ARE ON MY LIST! anD THAT IS NOT A PLACE YOU WANT TO BE ON...

OMG I totally loved this story! You are fucking awesome!! You should write another one soon!