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| ronfanforever 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAw. I love anything Steve really but I think that you did a very great job at making Steve admit his feelings while still keeping in his tough guy character. Very nice characterization. |
| Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is so sweet! GREAT JOB! |
| Alexa 2007-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was amazing! It really opened my eyes to the other characters in the story, because most of the fanfics are about the Curtis Brothers and so on, and we know enough about them. I think you did a really great job at giving Evie a "character" to herself, because most people think shes a snobby greaser girl, and you get the idea that's she's a person too! And I really liked to see Steve's other side, and his relationship. Very well done, in other words. :D |
| Pictures 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, I liked this a lot. It was a great oneshot. and when Steve said he looked up to his dad when he was little... I really understood what he was talking about, and it made me think about my mom and stuff.. Good Job :) |
| dreamer 3097 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abusea good one |
| Queen Jane Approximately 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThere's not much I can say about this that hasn't already been said, but I just thought I'd let you know that you did a fabulous job. Your characterization is really great and this is all very well-written. I also love the way you write Steve and Evie; they're a terrific canon pairing (if a little dysfunctional, but that goes without saying), and you really brought them to life. Fantastic job. :) Peace, Queen Jane |
| Fairlane 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWow this was really great. I love how you potrayed their relationship, especially Evies attraction to his darker side. Steves character was awesome, and I thought you did a great job making Evie believable and giving her a voice. All the thoughts and emotions were really well described. I loved the last paragraph too. |
| So Confusingly Amusing 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSteve and Evie are probably my favorite canon pairing. There is just that something about Steve that makes me love him so much and this story was absolutely perfect. Of Soda and Sandy, Two-Bit and Kathy and Dally and Sylvia, Steve and Evie are the only ones I can see actually lasting through and maybe even get married. They are definitely something different and you really captured that. This definitely tugs at the heart strings. Great job. |
| xocrazililkelox 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abusewow what a powerful and enlightening story Steve stories are getting are getting pretty popular around this fandom (about time to!)I always felt that Steve wasnt really that hard and mean that there was always a soft and vunerable side to him that we never got see.I really hope you write more soon! |
| SamanthaMae 2007-07-24 ch 1, | abuse:) That was so cute. I love reading about Steve and Evie's relationship. It seems interesting to see how different people have a different take on Evie. I loved your's, though. She wasn't a total b*tch like some people put her as, but she wasn't Mrs. Happy-Go-Lucky. I kinda pictured her this way--being nice at points, though what she said to her brother was mean. Hehe, I say stuff like that all the time to people that make me mad. I hope you'll write another story on Evie, because you write her so well. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work :) |
| Kimiko 2007-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great! I like the way Steve's not always such a tough guy, that he does have a weak side. It's really good. Keep it up! Kimiko xx |