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Chu (tushantin)
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
T_T Made me sob! *sob* XD Nice! Still need to read "18 years later". 8D
timme
2008-10-25 . chapter 2
would have been better if you had him look in the mirror again and still see fred.
JamesKel
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
I was really upset when Fred died, it was so sad and so sudden. I wish he had lived too. And poor George! Having to go through life without his twin who he has been with since birth! They were never apart!

Anyway your story was really emotional and true0sih I guess. I liked your style and I hope you write one were they see he was like only knock out or something.

Keep writing it was great!!
Luckystar27
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this is so sad! And I completly agree with you about everything! I loved JK Rowling until the moment I read the part of the book when Fred dies. What was that woman thinking! Leaving George all alone like that? I agree with you, kill them both, or don't kill either one! Great fan fic though, make some more for poor Fred.
ohsocupcake
2007-08-26 . chapter 2
*sniffle* Why Fred? I mean, the last book had such a happy ending at the end (so much better than expected) but there was a big hole in it. Hm, I wonder what that was? FRED, no duh.

Anyway.
LOVED your fic.
Fred the Second. :)
Makes me feel all warm inside. :D
tanpopo no hana
2007-08-17 . chapter 2
That was a wonderful little story - thanks for sort of completing George's side of the epilogue. I found the first chapter a little short, but very to the point.

You SO described my feelings about JK in your A/N, too! And I'm still mad she left him out of the everybody-finally-lived-happily-ever-after-epilogue after making him so miserable. *chuckes book at stone-hearted JK*

But since she said in this Bloomsbury-chat that George really did name his first son Fred I think your story could be exactly what would have happened. Hope he had more little cute Fred like Weasley kids though.
luver of jellybeans
2007-08-05 . chapter 2
Hey!! It's Fred the 2nd! *looks wistful*

Heehee, I guess you followed the other people in HP, and named George's kid after a dece--decea--deceased member... *sob*

I can't wait to read the one where Fred SURVIVES!

*waits eagerly*
luver of jellybeans
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
*tear*

FRED! WHY?!? *sob*

I like the part where you said, "I don't care who dies; I just want Freddie to live! Why couldn't Percy have died?!" Lol, I agree.

Poor George...

Great one-shot!! In a bittersweet sort of way...

Off to read the next one-shot...
Sunshine Spray
2007-08-04 . chapter 2
So so sad but utterly enjoyable. Loved the pairings, Angelina still has someone after Fred died.
lilaya
2007-08-03 . chapter 2
that was really good. and u are so right. fred really didnt have to die. i cried when he died and everyone else too. I feel so empty now that harry potter is over...
bunnypixie
2007-08-01 . chapter 1
You already Know I love this and the second half too! very enjoyable read!Highly recomend it to anyone!
Kijo Kurosaki
2007-08-01 . chapter 2
This was a great story! I loved it! ^^

KT
Sailor Star Mars
2007-08-01 . chapter 2
awwz
FreakyD45663
2007-07-31 . chapter 2
i loved this, so cute. it made me sad though, i miss fred. damn you jk, why did you have to kill the greatest character
Liz
2007-07-31 . chapter 2
This was a really good story, I love your writing style!
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