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Savvy0X
2008-07-07
ch 18,
abuseI don't even have the words to describe how I feel about this story. It's wretched, I guess the word is, but I love it. It describes the human condition so accurately, and bluntly under all of the pretty and horribe words. It's hard to say how I feel about it. Everything seems too hurtfuly real. It is one of two of it's kind that I have ever read on the internet. It is quite an ironic story really. You have written a true masterpiece here I think, and with it, you have a created a character of the likes that I have never encountered before. Mrs. Prior is despicable in all senses of the word, but when you read this you can't help but actually prefer her over everyone else. This also reminds me why I hated Beckett in the first place. There is nothing good about that man in this story. At least Mrs. Prior doesn't like to pretend to be something she isn't, like he does. I wish I was more eloquent with words, but I'm afraid I'm not, and it's hard to express how I feel through merely typed letters. I love it, and I hope you post another chapter soon.

Savvy
PearlSparrow13
2008-02-19
ch 18,
abuseAnother good chapter. Poor Norrington, things don't look so great for anyone right now.
Ladybug21
2008-02-05
ch 18,
abuseWhat a brilliant little montage... certainly fills in all the gaps! (And don't worry about the long breaks between updates - I haven't updated any of my fics in over a month, and feel guilty as all heck, so I can totally understand.)

Keep writing!
Mrs.DeppQueenObsessorGoddes...
2008-02-05
ch 18,
abuseWow, I really am glad you added another chapter! I really liked how you wrote it, it turned out very well. I can't wait to see Beckett's return in the next chapter!
cazonetta
2008-01-02
ch 17,
abuseAh, so Beckett has something to regret.

And... I don't trust James to be with Mrs. Prior. Though I do feel sorry for her, who knows what might become of either of them if this game continues? Oh, and the description— yet again, very well done.

Also, I forgot to answer your reply: being a historical nut, yes, I am EXTREMELY keen on the 18th century. :) My one favorite era... (which is the reason why I've watched all three POTC films and continously read fanfics, I guess).
Lady Elizabeth Beckett
2008-01-02
ch 17,
abuseAs a Beckabeth fan, if I said that this chapter made me happy, I would tell a lie...
Very well written, anyway.
Scarlet Snidget
2008-01-01
ch 17,
abuseInteresting turn. Really, every time I think things are going to slow down, you add a new twist. :] It never fails to intrigue me.
Drusilla Braun
2008-01-01
ch 17,
abuseInterresting. I'm curious to know where Elizabeth is going to show up. Would be interresting if she went to Tortuga and ran into Mrs. Prior and James. Do continue. This is great.
Ladybug21
2008-01-01
ch 17,
abuseHmm. Interesting. Ah, everyone's love lives are so messed up in this fic... it'll be highly interesting to see what happens to all of them. Are we going to leave Elizabeth behind in the dust now? Or are she and her father going to pop back up somewhere in here? And what about Will and Jack - are they even scheduled to make an appearance in the first place? (I'd almost prefer they didn't - Norrington and Beckett are SO much more interesting.) Excellent chapter, as always - please update soon!
Mrs.DeppQueenObsessorGoddes...
2008-01-01
ch 17,
abuseOnce again you have written an amazing chapter! Keep updating!!
Drusilla Braun
2007-12-31
ch 16,
abuseThis is a very interresting story. I enjoy your character of Mrs. Prior. Hope to read more soon.
Scarlet Snidget
2007-12-26
ch 16,
abuseSo I've finally caught up... and now Norrington's in the mix, Elizabethe's fled, and Beckett... well, we haven't seen enough of him since she fled. Do continue soon. :]
Mrs.DeppQueenObsessorGoddes...
2007-12-11
ch 16,
abuseAnother really great chapter! Keep writing!
Lady Elizabeth Beckett
2007-12-10
ch 16,
abuseNorrington is very well written! He and Mrs. Prior find common ground...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ladybug21
2007-12-09
ch 16,
abuseWow. And everyone loses control and goes crazy. :)

I like how you show Mrs. Prior and James responding to each other's emotions - things that they see of themselves within each other. Very well-written chapter. And I simply can't wait for the next update! Please keep writing!
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