 Shounen-Ai 2009-06-14 . chapter 3Addicted. Instantly. =3 |
 die blaue Rose 2008-09-14 . chapter 3I love it! ^^ I cant wait to find out what is next! x3 UPDATE SOON! |
 sulie 2008-06-16 . chapter 3loved the first three chapter.
update?
How did naruto meet orochimaru anyway... |
 savelove 2008-04-20 . chapter 3If you leave again, I will be forced to eat you
you have made me curious. orochimaru you fag! haha damn thats mean I never use that term because it sucks but so does orochi-kun! Yeah so just keep up the work Its an kewl story and I want to figure out whats going on between the love triangle of sorts I guess.
thanks |
 Chubby-King-Chocobo 2008-03-29 . chapter 3 Ew...now i am curious...how did Naruto end up with the Orochi?
Intereguing story line. I look forward to more. ^^ |
 Bunnii 2008-03-29 . chapter 3Orochimaru is gonna get so pissed if he finds out that Naruto has been in the arms of Sasuke. Especially considering how possesive he is.
Poor Naru-chan~ I hope Naruto and Sasuke get to do something before Orochimaru comes though. Then Naruto could have abundant happiness before Orochimaru comes back to ruin it. :D
update soon this time please. xD
the waiting is killing me. haha xD |
 shadowphoenix143 2008-03-26 . chapter 3Great story so far! I hope this doesn't turn into a tragedy without some kind of warning though because the beginning freaked me out a little. A thing you could do to make sure your readers don't get confused when your switching scenes would be to
In Sasuke’s wake, Naruto blinked in confusion.
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 charmpit 2008-03-24 . chapter 3I'm praying Orochi-kin doesn't come home to find his Naru-chan cuddling with their hot neighbor. He might make them have a threesome, yuk yuk yuk!
Actually that isn't a very appetizing thought, is it? |
 Larz the Seventh and a Half 2008-03-24 . chapter 3Oh no. Orochimaru's gonna get so pissed. Also, thanks for updating! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love today, 2 people(too lazy to put the other dude's name) who haven't updated for months fanally does, and on the same day I might add, I drew this cute little demon weasel thing, and my brother isn't home! Hope you update soon, and good luck! |
 Not Such a Hot Shot 2008-03-24 . chapter 3Aw, I like that chapter a lot. I can't wait for the next one. =] |
 Satoshi33girl 2008-03-24 . chapter 3love it update soon! :) |
 honeysuckelvine 2008-03-24 . chapter 3 It was worth it! |
 dreamerswaking 2008-03-23 . chapter 3Hmm. I'm interested in how this will progress. Just how abusive is Orochimaru? How will Sasuke find out?
My mind is filled with questions and I look forward to your next update. |
 yourbabykitsune 2008-03-23 . chapter 3aww sasuke is so nice to naruchan. great story XD |
 Bunnii 2008-03-17 . chapter 2i noticed you haven't updated in a while...
but this is a really good story and has a good start!
please update when you get the chance! :] |