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Shounen-Ai
2009-06-14 . chapter 3
Addicted. Instantly. =3
die blaue Rose
2008-09-14 . chapter 3
I love it! ^^ I cant wait to find out what is next! x3 UPDATE SOON!
sulie
2008-06-16 . chapter 3
loved the first three chapter.

update?

How did naruto meet orochimaru anyway...
savelove
2008-04-20 . chapter 3
If you leave again, I will be forced to eat you

you have made me curious. orochimaru you fag! haha damn thats mean I never use that term because it sucks but so does orochi-kun! Yeah so just keep up the work Its an kewl story and I want to figure out whats going on between the love triangle of sorts I guess.

thanks
Chubby-King-Chocobo
2008-03-29 . chapter 3
Ew...now i am curious...how did Naruto end up with the Orochi?

Intereguing story line. I look forward to more. ^^
Bunnii
2008-03-29 . chapter 3
Orochimaru is gonna get so pissed if he finds out that Naruto has been in the arms of Sasuke. Especially considering how possesive he is.
Poor Naru-chan~ I hope Naruto and Sasuke get to do something before Orochimaru comes though. Then Naruto could have abundant happiness before Orochimaru comes back to ruin it. :D

update soon this time please. xD
the waiting is killing me. haha xD
shadowphoenix143
2008-03-26 . chapter 3
Great story so far! I hope this doesn't turn into a tragedy without some kind of warning though because the beginning freaked me out a little. A thing you could do to make sure your readers don't get confused when your switching scenes would be to


In Sasuke’s wake, Naruto blinked in confusion.

O
charmpit
2008-03-24 . chapter 3
I'm praying Orochi-kin doesn't come home to find his Naru-chan cuddling with their hot neighbor. He might make them have a threesome, yuk yuk yuk!

Actually that isn't a very appetizing thought, is it?
Larz the Seventh and a Half
2008-03-24 . chapter 3
Oh no. Orochimaru's gonna get so pissed. Also, thanks for updating! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love today, 2 people(too lazy to put the other dude's name) who haven't updated for months fanally does, and on the same day I might add, I drew this cute little demon weasel thing, and my brother isn't home! Hope you update soon, and good luck!
Not Such a Hot Shot
2008-03-24 . chapter 3
Aw, I like that chapter a lot. I can't wait for the next one. =]
Satoshi33girl
2008-03-24 . chapter 3
love it update soon! :)
honeysuckelvine
2008-03-24 . chapter 3
It was worth it!
dreamerswaking
2008-03-23 . chapter 3
Hmm. I'm interested in how this will progress. Just how abusive is Orochimaru? How will Sasuke find out?
My mind is filled with questions and I look forward to your next update.
yourbabykitsune
2008-03-23 . chapter 3
aww sasuke is so nice to naruchan. great story XD
Bunnii
2008-03-17 . chapter 2
i noticed you haven't updated in a while...
but this is a really good story and has a good start!
please update when you get the chance! :]
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