THAT WAS REALLY COOL. I LIKED IT. I LIKE SPRACE BETTER THO

yes yes yes YES

um.

i love it.

This is, in fact, the first Spot/David I've seen, and it works so well within the context of this story. I love short, expressive pieces like these that give such a strong mental image. It gives you a lot to reflect on. I loved it!

I have to admit I was surprised when this was Spot/David. Surprised in an AWESOME way. Hooray for Spot/David! This was very well done, too; very intense, just like both of the boys.

i don't think i've ever read a spot/david story before. i like the way u wrote it. it's great.

hot damn!
hold on, trying to get some coherent words together.
actually, i don't think i've ever even read spot/david, which is weird, when you think about it, because they have an INTENSE scene when david/boots/jack head to Brooklyn for a visit. this has that intensity, which is why i like it.. that, and the mouth reference.
and -- well -- hot damn!

This is beautiful. I don't necessarily like DavidSpot but you have written this amazingly. This is perfect Spot, just as defended and hard as can be. Poor boy. You're truly talented, I hope you know that.

M Spavid. So rare yet so, so good. As with all of your other work, I loved it. Your characterization of Spot was perfect; you didn't sugarcoat him at all, and I loved it. Nice work!

Spot/David, eh? don't see this pairing that often, but this was amazing. Spot's character was basically perfect. You achieved a perfect glimpse into the two characters lives in such a short fic.
Another excellent job, as usual. :)
-Braids

This was fantastic. You should write Spavid more often.

You didn’t present us with an overanalyzed version of Spot. You gave us Spot, raw, strong, and the way he was depicted in the movie. This is something seldom seen and long overdue.

Favorite lines:
“He was no pansy. He didn’t kiss boys.”

“Want burned across him, but Spot didn’t utter a single noise of pleasure or otherwise.”

“The air was full of salt and fish and tar and sweat as he worked to steady his breathing.”

This is a very different David as well. You’ve shown a secret side of him that I really like.

“After all, David didn’t get his reputation as a mouth just for knowing what to say -- Spot counted on David exactly because he knew what not to say.”

Wow. So good. So very, very good. Those first three or four opening lines were just fantastic, so in character (at least...my head canon).

I like how you've done Spot and I think there is potential for a seriously interesting relationship here. I'd love to see more.

Ooh, Spavid! Don't see much of that very often, but it's a nice change from the every-day, usual pairings. You wrote this perfectly, especially Spot. I could never imagine him being gentle or sentimental, and I think that you wrote his character very well. Great job!

--The Meadowlark