breathtaking!

loved it!

Lucy's alive Lucy's alive!

wow that is so... i dont have words for it... i dont mean to get all cheesy but those are words describing magic.. as close as you can get to real magic... really beautiful. Thankyou for sharing :) :O

Awwww...that was such a cute story.

This is an amazing story! You're extremely creative! Hope you keep writing!

I loved it !1

awww, how sweet, I like it a lot!

oh man i love this story i was crying but when you brought them both back to live like the story was part of city of angels. your awesome

I enjoyed this. If only it was all that simple.