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Shadow Of Danta
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
u need to make them longer then that. it was getting good.
invisible29
2009-04-06 . chapter 2
Great Job! QUICKLY UPDATE!
Kimmiko T.
2009-02-17 . chapter 2
I love Im Sorry story!
Please update soon!
Ja'ne!
JF343BBN211
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
It's a good idea, it just has way to many grammar erorrs for me to even understand some of it. You need to get someone to beta these before posting.
Dawn Rules
2008-11-01 . chapter 2
Awsome Please update soon!
vampiress-1313
2008-07-29 . chapter 2
uk so please write another chapter soon please
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YYx
2008-02-03 . chapter 2
Hi~!!

This is a g8 fic.
And it IS small indeed -.-'
And i don't think 6 months is soon...
But i still like this fic ~!!
Hope u'll update soon~!!
SamuraiJedi
2007-12-30 . chapter 2
i like it. it seems to me this is the type of story where Ash is gonna have to have a talk with Jimmy to set him straight.
Devil Master 7
2007-08-04 . chapter 2
Good Story please right more of this story.
dmaster21
2007-08-02 . chapter 2
Nice story i like this story and i hope you update soon
zombie hippie
2007-07-29 . chapter 2
There is an improvement in grammar, but you can stll improve. Like, when a character asks a question, don't use a period, use a question mark.
For example: "What?" she said, not looking at him.

Other than that, this is a nice story. Look forward for more from this.
PokemonTrainerAmy
2007-07-29 . chapter 2
hey this story's really good :3 can't wait for the next chapter
Forgotten Werewolf
2007-07-25 . chapter 2
wELL. IT IS PRETTY GOOD START.
nICE JOB.
everlastinflam3
2007-07-25 . chapter 2
it was very good especially the whole ash vs. jimmy XD
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