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| darkaura1214 2008-07-29 ch 2,  | abuseuk so please write another chapter soon please from \may/miyu |
| YY.x-Loves-Ikarishippy-x. 2008-02-03 ch 2, | abuseHi~!! This is a g8 fic. And it IS small indeed -.-' And i don't think 6 months is soon... But i still like this fic ~!! Hope u'll update soon~!! |
| SamuraiJedi 2007-12-30 ch 2, | abusei like it. it seems to me this is the type of story where Ash is gonna have to have a talk with Jimmy to set him straight. |
| Devil Master 7 2007-08-04 ch 2, | abuseGood Story please right more of this story. |
| dmaster21 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseNice story i like this story and i hope you update soon |
| zombie hippie 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abuseThere is an improvement in grammar, but you can stll improve. Like, when a character asks a question, don't use a period, use a question mark. For example: "What?" she said, not looking at him. Other than that, this is a nice story. Look forward for more from this. |
| PokemonTrainerAmy 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abusehey this story's really good :3 can't wait for the next chapter |
| Forgotten Werewolf 2007-07-25 ch 2, | abusewELL. IT IS PRETTY GOOD START. nICE JOB. |
| everlastinflam3 2007-07-25 ch 2, | abuseit was very good especially the whole ash vs. jimmy XD |