I hope you're not done. That's so sad, real, well-written. Usually I don't like stuff about people feeling really awful but no one was beat up. And Mark dying is okay for a fan-fic but they better not do it on the show. I'm mostly into Elisabeth, of course the Abby and Luka and probably Deb and Carter cuz who else calls her Deb.

that's so sad. :(

Great fanfiction! You really cut my heart. Love the Mark and Elizabeth stories,very thouching. Please keep writting!

Poor Elizabeth and Ella! Poor Mark... I hope Mark doesn't die when AE leaves later this season... oh well back on topic - interesting story!... I'm gonna take a gander and guess the couples are the following: Abby/Luka, Carter/Jing-Mei, and Mark/Elizabeth

lettme guess - this is complicated - the characters aren't that easy to fiugure out, you know, which one's which and which couple I'm reading about. But who is Chen with? the rest are Abby Carter and she is having Luka's kiddo, well, was and Elizabeth and Mark but Mark is, um. 1/2 dead and, well, YOU NEED TO CONTINUE! THE STORY MIGHT BE so farfetched but the way u wrote it was exellent- totally believeable!

Continue continue! Is Chen with Carter?

Great story. The couples are a little confusing though.

Oh my God! Write more! I don't like it that you are more than willing to kill Mark off and leave Lizzie with a baby, but I'll get over it. It was Abby who wasn't pregnant right? I really hope you pair Chen with Carter . . . that would be one heck of a cute baby! Good work . . . please write more soon! Jac

What an excellent story! Please continue with it!

Very interesting idea. I just want to know the reason for not naming the three couples. IMO the mystery doesnt help us to check if the characters are out of character or not.

ok the first couple is Mark and Elizabeth is the other two Carter and Jing Mei and Luka and Abby?

awwww, this is so sweet! I love it, and keep writing!

Interresting. You're right, one couple's obviously Mark and Elizabeth, but I can't figure out the other two... I mean, I have suspiciouns, but I NEED MORE CLUES! And more clues means another chapter! NOW NOW NOW!