Awwww! Poor sev! 8'(

Ok I have two comments 1: lily didn't play quidditch and 2: er... You do know that snape loved lily right?

I loved it. Have you made more stories? You really should make more!

Why must it always end badly for them? I'm goignt to write a fic where it doesn't!

That was a awesome story. I truly loved how heart felt the ending was. Snape visiting her gave was truly a wonderful ending to the story.

Thank you for writing this!

That was really awesome! I just wanted to say thanks for commenting on my story. It was really inspirational b/c it's the first one I've written in a while. In case you wanted to know, my sn on .com is sumblinkgirl4182. Yeah, lol. N e ways, great story! Keep up the good work! -Blinki

if you had searched for a latin-english dictionary on the net, you would have been able to find stop. therer are 2 words in latin for stop, consisto and subsisto.

Hi! I really loved this storry. There should be a sequel or something lyke that. If you do, I'll keep reviewing. If you don't...I'll cry! I don't get why this is rated R, but oh well! TTFN!

Oh my god. That was a good story. I cried my eyes out. ahhhhhhh Poor Sweet Cheeks. Ya I'm a real Snape fan. Great Story.

Melissa

I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story! It's perfect! I am also writing a Lily and Severus story, though in mine she did fall in love with James-more than she did in yours. But yours is fantastic-I love it all so much! And I was wondering if you would like to read it-here's the link.

.

I haven't finished it yet-Lily's only fifteen too, Severus and her have only been going out for a week, though they will go on for much longer. But I hope you like it!

-Lavinia

This was great! I would love to see a squeal to this, perhaps Severus can find Lily's dairy and find some peace or Harry could end up being Snapes son! Sorry I just can't stop with that Harry is Snapes son thing. You rule

very good story this isn't like all the other severus and lily stories this maybe the best one yet.

aaaaw that was a good story!

Awwwww! So,so cute...I love Snape/Lily fics,but there never seem to be many of them about...and this is pretty much one of the best I've read so far :o)

Love Silver Willow

*sobs* that.. was.. so.. sad! My god did I cry! It was very good and well written. Bravo!