Well i liked it but if you are as old as the people in this story i think you could have did a better job

Interesting story ya got here. So is this ego ot poke shippy? 'Cause I can't figure it out.

Chase

R-Babe kekeke!

“Well yhoo should know I dhont drihnk that often..” Ash said smirking to himself as Gary rolled his eyes...“No, really?!?! I would have NEVER had guessed Ketchum.” ~~LMAO! I love that part I can totally see Gary doing that!

OMFG, Misty and Ash they are funny drunk! Gawd and I know the embarrassment Gary is feeling =__=;; Haha, now Gary has to carry both of them. Oo0oO, your babe is STRONG, kekeke XD But Omg, I hate it when I have to carry someone, it's soo hard to walk them!

“No, biggie carrot top. Girls are always trying find excuses to get a piece of me. So I’m about used to it by now.” He said proudly as a huge mocking grin ~~Kekeke, we don't need excuses, we just touch him when we want XD

Lol at Ash yelling at the imaginary Pidgey! Buwhaha! As he starts yelling at it!! "..Yeah IM talkin' to you." BUWHAHA HAHA HAHA ! Seriously, I am still cracking up at it..For some reason it's hilarious ^_^

O0oh snap! Misty and Gary sharing a sleeping bag together, kekeke. And he's shirtless too! LUCKY! Oh noes! Misty what are you doing?! Leaving from Gary's arms?! ;ghagkhaslgkhgohag'odh !

'kay so, Ash is an idiot. If Pigeotto had flash, that could have been used a long time ago and he could HAVE gone with his pokemon to look for Misty in the first place. But noo-oo-oo he decided to pace around!? OMG IDIOT! But yay for Gary being the hero, because we all know that he IS STRONGER then Ashy ;p Sign, I want my babe to save me. Kyo! Here kitty-kitty! Lol XD

But yes, totally gotta agree with ya on it is a GOOBER! I really enjoyed this chapter, that I waited for. But all that matters was that it was update before the OC Rya and Gary pic on DA, kekeke XD Now I let's see if we can get another update before summers over, lol ;p Hahaha~hehehe ^__^

Oh R-Babe! I love you too! Even though I help you steer away from being lazy, I'll admit I ain't no saint myself. As you know that I can be lazy too! GAWD DON'T WE BOTH KNOW THAT?! It's bed when we BOTH are LAZY at the SAME time XDD Which is bad on our part as Ego-writers, lol :p Well R-Babe, I'll catch you later and yeah, loo-oove yoo-oou! Ta-ta for now!

Lili Neko =^-^=

Tra-la-la-la, Gary is just so smooth and quick to try to make the moves on our lil' hot number Misty. Buwhaha I love the cheesy pick up line XD ! But of course Misty isn't going down with a fight :p HAHA "it's your face." Hahaha, Lon has been using that quote for a bit, "blah, blah, blah YEAH YOUR FACE!" ... =__= ... Gawd, lol XD

Kekeke I love the lil' bump and bitter between Gary and Misty and when Brock returned, lol! "Who wants cocktails?!" ...You know me and my sin, soo that minds dirty thought ahead, lol. As it just kinda sound wrong, but it was funny!

She smiled warmly and took a sip of her drink and cooed to herself. “M, so good, should be illegal.” and “Hey! Where’d Brock go? And My drink?!”...Lmao ^^ Misty doesn't sound like she's addicted to liquor, gawd compare to us, kekeke ^^;;

Haha, I love how Gary is being revengeful towards Ash. And the bittering starts again with Gary and Miksty, kekeke, I love it!

OMG, yay now on to the 4th chapter that I have been waiting for like forever!! Kekeke, on wards! Much loove R-Babe!

Lili Neko =^-^=

R-Babe!

Buwhaha! I still love the mean-cocky Gary! Man, gotta love the hatred between Gary and May, sibling love XD

Oh-oh and love the twist that Gary's parents is where Ash is going, kekeke XD Can't wait to see what you have in store laater ^__^

Buwhaha, love Gary's comment of Misty being a 'fox' kekeke ;p Once again "oh snap!" at the ending where Mists is there and Ash wasn't expecting her ^__^

Much love R-Babe! Next chapter!

Lili Neko =^-^=

R-Babe?! You deleting your first version?! Ahh! You know that you could have just replace the chapters that way you still had the old reviews and who ever fav'ed and alerted the story XD

But anyways, the editing of the first chap is clearer now...But the 1st chapter is still oh so sad with Baby Gary, waa-aa-aa! POOR Gary-Boo! Damn no good parents!

**Glomps on to Lil' Gary** It's oo-ok, I wub you and I know who else loves you the most... **points at R-Babe** Her over there, looves you A LOT!

Lol, well onto reading this again XD! Much loove R-Babe! **NEXT CHAPTER**

Lili Neko =^-^=