Maybe the best written work I've read on here. Update!

awesome. Now I have to go and play that damn game all the way through...

I have owned it since it came out and have NEVER completed it. (sigh)

Now I see that I need to finish it...

FINISH IT!

I want to read the Indwelling... How do I find it in that mass of 200 pages of FF IX fanfic stories?

(runs away weeping piteously)

I would like to go read Indwelling, but the search feature of this stupid website does not have the capability of typing in a title and hitting search. This is quite frustrating.

and yes. Kuja is a hotty.

I always figured that Blank was light in his tight leather shorts... XD

Wonderful chapter. simply wonderful.

Onward.

this is wonderful.

I love it.

I am hungry for more and at the same time, I suddenly have the urge to go and play the game again.

XD

I LOVED IT!

I don't care if it was corny. I loved corn. Cored Beef. Corned Video games, Corned Movies... you name it... Corn is good.

I like it; it adds more depth to the original story, while keeping the charachters and setting intact. One problem though, is that many of the charachters recieved little or no "screen time". But I can just assume that was becuase you were focussing on Zidane for the majority of the time. I especailly like the chapter(s) about Beatrix, who is also kicked out of the story a way in. They had a very surreal feeling, which i liked. Well, good job.

Wow, I love this story ALOT it's just as got as the game if not better, everything is explained so well I can picture it all perfectly in my head. Thank you for making my free time less boring.

Wow, very nice :) Easily the best FFIX fic I've read so far.

Aw! Kuja likes Zidane! Like a little bro! I love it so far.

Incredibly written and thought out, I'm so happy to have come apon this jewel of a story. This truly stood out from many I've read. I see this story was finished a long time back, but I still want to state how much I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for this story!

Beautiful. I've read it all...so beautiful...
In Terra-when they tried to break him. Oh, but that was blood...blood and breath captured in word and turned to poetry...tearfall...
Barefoot among the stars? Hmm...that's odd, because that seems a bit like my dreams only backwards, to quote Stiltzkin...

that was damn cool, i wish more stuff like that was around, you should add more chaps, ya know like a DVD version, great job, hope to see more of your work sonn

I know you've completed this fic quite some time ago, but I enjoyed it so much I felt that I should review.

The game itself is my favorite, but the plot has quite a few gaps that may seem confusing and may leave many questions. This story was wonderful because it added so much depth to the original story line of FFIX. I really liked how you gave further detail to certain events of the game.

There is only one thing that disappointed me a bit, however. In FFIX, during the Treno card tournament, Amarant tells Freya about how he first encountered Zidane, outside the King's mansion, where Zidane blackmailed Amarant. I had looked forward to you perhaps detailing this part of the original story, but you left it out. That's okay though, cuz there probably wasn't too much that could have been done with that incident, at least nothing I think up.

Other than that, this story was excellent and I really liked how you ended it. It was sad where Vivi passed away, but filled with hope for the Genomes. One of the very best FFIX fics I've ever read.