So sweet. :) Largely in-character.

That was very sweet. I liked it a lot. Keep on writing!:)

Hey, that was very, very good! I do believe that after Bob 'took leave' of Mainframe, some of him stayed with Dot, who became less hesitant to go ahead and do it. The only problem I saw was that I can't hear Dot say "gotta go now." Other than that, nice job.

Not bad. Most of these come out so sappy. It was nice to se one done realistically. Bravo.

Forgot to log in; anyway I liked this POV, I like your thoughts that Dot is unsure of her feelings for Dot. A lot of people assume she loves him, and generally I share that assumption, but I liked your idea that she was unsure.

That was really good! Tis sweet! I totally imagine Dot thinking that way!

Beautiful... touching... sad...