I'm not gonna cry...
I'm not gonna cry...
*snif*
GORAMIT!
*bursts into tears*

*subdued* Wow. I can't praise you for making me cry but I can praise you for making me care about your human character and believe that she and Hound had something special. That was well done. Hound's slow realization was striking.

Nitpick: they needed to be upwind of the graveyard otherwise the stench might even have made Hound ill. It's just a typo, I know, because you got it right in the baboon story.

A very sad but beautiful ending to a wonderful story. The inevitability of Addy's death was written in her words of what she believed would happen to her when she died... but even so, I found it heartwarming, if tragic.

Oh, spiffiness. Poor Hound, though. That's the real despair of humans and 'bots having relationships (be they friendly or romantic or whatever else): humans die way too quick. Still, I'm really enjoying this fanfic. It's different; contemplative--but above all, interesting. ^_^

That was beautiful. Absolutely, wonderfully beautiful. You did an excellent job of building a relationship between the two - a REAL, touching, deep dynamic based on emotions and common ground - and went through it step by step from start to finish without overdoing it or taking it any farther than it needed to go. You definitely succeeded with what you set out to do and I'm adding this to my favorites list. Kudos!

I admitt I cried abit-- I was not prepared for addy to be taken out like that. You give her and Hound a solemn air that is both profound and loving.

Thank you for the brillant story.

Sad, but intriguing chapter. I liked it a lot (and the update was quick!) You should definitely keep writing stories like these. =)

That honestly brought a tear to my eye.

That was written beautifully.

Keep writing, please?

This was beautiful. Truly beautiful.

Sad, but the right amount of sadness. There's not much bad one can say about this.

VERY beautiful story. =D I like your writing style, how you give enough description but don't overwhelm readers with info, y'know? Addy and Hound seem so sweet together.

This was an immensely enjoyable read. It had so much feeling and warmth to it and it's been a while since something made me smile like that.

Oh, oh this was too sweet for words. I adore the intimacy you bound up into the barest of words to express the depth of the relationship between Hound and Addy.

Believe me it was far sexier and hotter than any smut you could write. You are an author that understands the unspoken, the mood, the need and art of silences that fill between your scenes.

Most writers are like rabid Post Modernist that are terrified of any negative space, filling their stories with color and commentary until the noise of it deafens you. You are like a master of the ancient Chinese paintings with a few brush strokes you create mountains and the flight of birds on the wing.

It is a crime that more people haven't read this. You handle the same themes far more maturely and gracefully than dozens of other writers.

I love your Hound and how solid and easygoing he is. His and Addy's relationship is a garden growing beautifully.

I am really glad you updated this. Hound does not get enough love and you have the skill to pull off Addy and the savannah without piling on the cliche sap.

Any attraction to an Autobot is more a marriage of true minds than horomones anyway.

I enjoyed this on the Padded Cell. I'm faving it here. :)