the angst reaches my heart *sniffs* beautifly done, however i think aoshi was a little too emotional. Usually it would be more quiet, or a stiff protest. However, if you're going for ooc then it's different

that was SO SAD!
please write a sequel where aoshi and misao met again...
and he realized that he has feelings for her...
PLEASE!
just write a story with a HAPPY ending!

I hate u! ur making me cry! PLEASE write a sequel where he goes after her or something...but i cant talk because i just wrote an essay about an eight year old commiting suicide for english...

Ah! that was sad.

Aw! That's so sad. But...finally! It's sad and all but we all knew it was going to happen. Thankyou for finaling giving us a break. But, uh, I really am kinda tearing up.

Hey, it's a good story, a real tear-jerker, but isn't Aoshi and Misao suppose to be together and not apart? I mean Aoshi is going to be lonely without Misao, and what is Misao to do after leaving Aoshi?

aw! how sad!

gah..

how mean.

very well written. i applaud you for that.

but gah! you broke them up..