A great story. Very good.

Well done. Lily's very human, and I like the touch that they think Neville will certainly be the one.

Amazing. truly Amazing.

WOW. Is there another chapter where you do the night the Potter's die? This is *excellent*. Unique perspective (the "you" instead of "I" or "Lily") and very, very well written. Awesome job!! (Please let there be more??)

~Red

Sort of no longer canon, but brilliant nonetheless. The writing is practically flawless (not that I was paying attention, the plot had me hooked). I'm glad this isn't just a one-shot, and I'm looking forward to your next chapters.