This chapter is awesome! Full of innuendo and incomprehension...
Delightful :)

LOVED IT I would love to see more of this story its a little addicting

WONDERFUL! Please continue this! :o) Must see what happens next!

I really love this story. I'm really jealous that you thought of this concept before I could, because I'm a diehard Snily shipper. I'm going to have to insist that you continue it, even though you don't appear to have touched it in months. Please? Please finish? Pretty please?

Also, I love all your stories. You're wonderful.

I am sorry that I have not reviewed all of the chapters to the story. But I am going to review all in one chapter, K? I love your work. I love that you have had it where they have to take baby steps to get back the trust and I love the slowly revloving feelings they are starting to show. Please continue. ANd thanks.

Hey - rereading this story for like the fifth time this week, I swear it's the best thing I've discovered on fanfiction - it's just occurred to me: Snape and Lily are sharing rooms now, right? So wouldn't they wake each other up, what with crying/screaming nightmares... Just a thought...

I really love this story and can't wait until you update again!! :D

i love it, and i hope you update soon. snape has always been one of my favorite characters and i think so far that you've gotten him just right.

i'm wondering though why the main characters are lily luna potter and severus snape? lily luna is harry and ginny's daughter.

Cannot wait for Tuesday. Best thing I've read in a long time! This is incredible...*drools* They're both perfectly in character - an incredibly hard thing to manage in such an out-of-character situation - and I am eagerly awaiting more!

*looks for next page frantically* where's the next chapter? there must be another chapter? ACCIO CHAPTER!... Great story, which I will be keeping up with.

Great job! I love, love, love this story! Please update soon :) I especially enjoy your characterizations - the "banter" between Lily and Sev is great. So is the tension/tenderness deal. However, I would love to see Sev more of a hero - there should be some things he does best of all, and maybe be a little more valuable and/or respected as a spy? Anyway, I love the fanfic and the characters - please, please update soon! :D

Amazing job! :D

Oh, my. That was sinfully delicious. And it had as much angst as a Jane Austen novel. I continue to really like what you've done with these characters. They're likable and dynamic.

I'm glad you updated again and I think it's going very nicely!

Oy! I just read the last 2 chapters. I've been busy with school so I haven't had time to read or review my favorite fanfics as much as I've wanted.

I just got done for the semester, so I'm starting to get back in the swing of things. I'm loving this story as I always have. The tension between Lily and Sev just kills me everytime. I too wish they hugged. I can see why things are still a bit complicated between them right now now. But it builds up even more tension and longing, which keeps us craving for more.

And thanks so much for another hot makeout scene! :D