 xRandomHeartsx 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Loved it! ^.^
I don't know why, but I don't feel bad for Ed at all... he should just be happy he was lucky enough to have a good time with Greed!! Damn... Greed's too sexy.
And so was this story!! Good job!
~Kate |
 Regal-13th 2009-08-12 . chapter 1god you kow what ur the onlydecent yaoi fanfic writer that did something hot w/ full metal alchemist ad it too short you should make it that after greed raped ed he fell inlove with him and kidnaped ed and brought him to FATHER and make ed fall in love w/ him if you will make this story ill be happy to help you with the plot since im good at it but i think most ppl are... HOT STORY DUDE! |
 reddoggie 2009-07-07 . chapter 1hm. i liked it. even if wasnt the happiest moment for ed. it was very hot. yknow? i feel bad for edward. but i enjoyed reading. awesome story, i liked it.XD thanks for writing it!QQ |
 Fullmetal komusume 2009-04-05 . chapter 1(To amazed for words ) |
 Chibi Darren 2009-03-21 . chapter 1*claps* YAYZ! I LOVES ME SOME RAPE!
Darren:You're a sick sick girl!
Me: I KNOW! Nice job! First FMa fanfic I've read! yayz!
Update soon! |
 Enski 2008-09-28 . chapter 1o.o Wow...
That was good, but it made me feel depressed for Edward.
Good-Depression? oO XD
Keep on writing~
- Enski |
 yaoi-midnight-mistress 2008-09-26 . chapter 1I remember reading this on Devianart. It's really good add a sequal. Suggestions: Greed comes back and does it again only this time his is not alone he is with Envy and Envy takes the form of Ed's brother. So Ed will have to do what Greed says or Al will be hurt. Or Greed does it again only with someone else at the back end. Just tossing out ideas.
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(Okay Dokey) |
 Evangeline Jr. 2008-08-24 . chapter 1That was scary. *shudders*
Nice work! |
 ThePyroAlchemist 2008-06-30 . chapter 1GAH! I love this! I found it mezmerising and I LOVED the way you characterized greed!
More, I say!
-runs to read more of your fics-
xXTulipXx |
 theheartstoppedbeating 2008-02-12 . chapter 1 wow, that was pretty desterbing. You're a good writer though. Just not my thing, lol... |
 PuRE'Curse 2008-01-08 . chapter 1My... How, interesting. -laugh= I always saw Greed as a rapist... ^^; (and riding a unicorn in a dress but that's just Brieanna laughing at me saying he's a girl. psh. whatev. xD) ignore that. xD
I enjoyed this. Although it was rather quick. I wanted more angst. yum. P: |
 Sanosuke 2007-11-25 . chapter 1 that was really hott... thanr you for a really good fic. meh if i can't rape him READ FICS ABOUT SOMEONE WHO CAN!! |
 HisokaYukiko 2007-10-30 . chapter 1O.o Whoa... That was perfect for an Ed torture fetish fan like myself! I'm so sadistically happy! |
 IizSeth 2007-09-06 . chapter 1i want more more! lol j/k but yes please update soon! i love your stories |
 shikuki 2007-08-28 . chapter 1 very sad but very good |