Nice showdown between Megan and Colby. You did a really good job of showing the anger and the deep hurt both were feeling.

Awesome story!

I love this fic!

It is very in character.

Reminds me of life...*sighs*

Oh, this is really good. I don't get Megan/Larry either, much more a Colby/Megan (if it can't be me).

I liked this.

Well done.

I loved this! It flowed so well. Now that the new season has started, MAYBE you could write a sequel? PRETTY PLEASE?

The ONLY mistake I found was that Charlie does all that math stuff in his garage, not basement.

That being said, this was expertly written. It was intruiging - and my spelling is shit, I know - and emotional (a good thing) and captured every bit of Megan and Colby's relationship, as well as Colby and Davids, and in my opinion you had each seperate character smack-dab on, too.

Great job doesn't do this fic justice, but if I try to use any longer words right now my brain is going to implode...or would it be explode?

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Awesome fic!

All that you write is good stuff Ellen! It's true!

I liked the intensity, anger & emotions swirling around in this story.

Well done.

:)

Yay! more Janus LIst stuff. I can't get enough of it, and i think that the dynamic and how it's changed/going to change between Megan and Colby. This is a pretty good start.

that was really different...good job