i didn't really like the first chapter because i didn't understand any of it. and you were out of character , but you did a much better job in the second chapter. i like how Dudley was watching and harry never knew. this will be an interesting read to see how much more Dudley knows then we think. so i look forward to your next update. later dude.

this chapter was.. nice. It has Plot! (heaves a sigh out the window)

"Yes, I know the muffin man, the muffin man, the muffin man;
Oh, yes, I know the muffin man, who lives in Drury Lane."
For some reason I went all the way to WikiPedia to look this up. See, I always thought the muffin man lived on BLUEBERRY lane. (been living in a lie, childhood crushed, but I'll put on a brave face and make a decent review.) Uhm, when Snape "hurriedly thought about something else – just imagine that all your audience is in their underwear –", I got the impression he was a male stripper? Maybe? Not that I would- uhm- go there- and watch.. him- just for research purposes.. of course... Just.. going to read- next chapter.. now.

Sorry i didnt review earlier, i read this ages ago, just reread it. Really good to see the story from dudleys point f view. Great story! Jope to see ch.3 on its way soon!

I liked this chapter. I liked it better than the previous one. I don't know why.

This is very funny and very weird( in a good way). It reminds me of a friend of mine and how she writes.

very good,hope to see more soon

I experienced such a range of emotions while reading this story. The tension! The drama! The grapefruit!

Am especially looking forward to the chapter entitled "The Final Hiding Place for the Junior Heavyweight Inter-School Boxing Champion of the Southeast."

And I must say, I agree with your thoughts on Miss C. Burbage. I mean, seriously, who the hell is she?

This is so random and almost makes no sense but it works and 'twas funny! I LOVED the muffin man thing 'cuz it made me LOL and such

I love it, freakin perfect. I can't wait to read more.

Awesome usage of the Frenchness

Je parle francaise un peu aussi mon ami.

Fantastic, Ginny!

God, that was so funny. I didn't know you had it in you, Ilaon.

Brilliance. This is going on the favourites, for sure.

You = LEGEND.

Jason Isaacs = SEXY BEAST.

Albus Severus = MY HUSBAND.

Wait ... scratch that last.

I loved it. I always thought it was a bit mean of Voldie to put TheRandom!Yaxley so far away from him ...

You insulted the books so perfectly.

Beautiful. Stunning.

A+!

HahahahaXDXD lol and so on:p
Really good! It was a little confusing, because I didn't really see how everyting fit into each other (Grapefruits and Death Eater meeting??), but it was really fun! Keep it up (I'm following you!!)!!

LL

Whoa ... such character depth and plot ... you astound me.

more please!