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| NCIS.drummer 2008-09-10 ch 1, | abuseUpdate its good so far |
| SarahKathryn 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. a different situation then usual. |
| EnglishChocolate 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is pretty good, but is it finished. I see it says complete but i donno i think it could do with a bit more or another part to it. It was good though. |
| DoodleTaffy 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abusethat was great,i liked it.it was funny too,especially the abby and mcgee part,but why where they there?pls continue.idk,u dont have 2,u culd leave it here,but u could continue if u wanted.idk,lol.but um,yeah,great story,i loved zivas mood and allit ws asad,but well descriptive.and c'mon mcgee,i dont think you culd b haullecating,wats ur reason,its late?lol.bye!:D |
| Lady aracne 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseaw really touching, good job!! |
| ladybrin 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI am enjoying this and can't wait until you give us another-- just help yourself-- and oh more mcabby too please-- love a tiva fic and thanks for adding mcabby to the mix- |
| K.T.Frasier 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseSounds like the next chapting will be rate M. LOL |