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| Aeris Leonheart 2007-12-28 ch 4, | abuseLMAO This is great so far! XD I didn't know that Tarantulas' Beast mode was female. Though someone once told me that Dinobot's beast mode was female. Sliverbolt was harpy eagle in BM? I thought his beast mode was a vulture in that. |
| Master Solo 2007-11-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseLOL I dunno which is funniest. nice work! |
| Tiger Priestess 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abuseHaha, I agree with you about Depth Charge being in Beast Machines, their looks and personalities were ruined. Hopefully the studio will still be in one piece. |
| OptimusxElita4ever 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abuseYay! Update! :D. Are ya gonna do Waspinator next? Bumblebee: *grumbles under breath* ME: What's your problem? Bumblebee: Waspinator annoys me. ME: How? Bumblebee: He keeps bugging me 'cuz I have an insect's name too and keeps asking me if I have a bug form or a beehive! That's what! Waspinator: Bee-bot havezz wingz yet? Bumblebee: NO! Get away from me! Waspinator: *pets on puppy dog-like eyes* (#)^(#). T^T. BumblebeeL Oh all right, sorry! Waspinator: Yayzz! *grabs Bumblebee and flies off* ^-^. Bumblebee: -_-*. ME: ;). Please update soon! :). |
| Kirmon64 2007-08-05 ch 3, | abuseI think I busted something up laughing at the Blackarachnia/Inferno bit in Tarantulus' chapter... it was just so darned unexpected XD |
| Kayman 2007-08-04 ch 3, | abuseonce again a sucsseful story! you should do mario or legend of zelda! |
| Tiger Priestess 2007-08-02 ch 3, | abuseWe need more guys that treat girls with respect. I couldn't get into Beast Machines, it wasn't as intersting as Beast Wars was. I also love Depth Charge, his personality and his temper are awesome. Loved the "Let's play Lifeguard" part, bet Depth Charge wished he waited to come out later and with back-up if he knew you were going to do that. |
| OptimusxElita4ever 2007-08-02 ch 3, | abuseFunny chapter, I had to look at my Transformers Ultimate Guide to see what Silverbolt and Depth Charge looked like, and they look cool! :) Bumblebee: Please update- *is interrupted by Waspinator* Waspinator: UPDATE SZZOON! UPDATE SZZOON! Bumblbee: HEY! That's my job! Waspinator: NO FAIR! Wazzpinator doezzn't get to do anythzing! ,(#)m(#) |
| Trickster91 2007-08-02 ch 3, | abuseOMG! I love Depth Charge too! DC: Not you too! I wanna play Lifeguard too! Let me join in! You might want to double check your spelling though. I have a feeling DC is in the next chapter! |
| Elita One 2007-08-02 ch 3, | abuselol that was great I also love depth charge i love his attitude dont know why but i always love the stubborn mechs. :) make sure you do depth charge ;) |
| Erin Elric 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseVery funny ^_^ You should write a chapter about Waspinator or Terrorsaur. |
| Trickster91 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuse"Are you the spawn of Unicron?" At first I thought it said, "Are you the spawn of a Unicorn?" I guess that what happens when you read fast. The rubber ducky tape was hilarious! Megatron is in trouble now. |
| Tiger Priestess 2007-07-27 ch 2, | abuseTarantulas had a female form?! * scrathes head* Wow! I knew Tarantulas made copies. He probably posted them all over the internet. Now we know what Megatron does when he's not hunting Maximals, singing songs to Mr. Squeekers. *sighs* He's not as bad as he thinks he is. *dodges blast* I'd better go, and don't forget to update. |
| Lil ANgel 2007-07-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseHahahahahahahahaha! Tarantulas Loves My little Poney and rainbows!? 0-0 Thats funny and about Megatron sings the Sesame's Street song to! Everything!! That was hilarious! Love it! Update soon! |
| Lil Angel 2007-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseBwahhahahahahahah!! Mr Squeakers! How can an evil predacon like Megatron has a rubber ducky!? Cant believe dis! and the slash part to! and dude he doesnt have a dog face.Hes a purple dinosour like Barney...HAH! BARNEY!! *starts laughing again* Megatron: *Getting angry* How many times I told to people not to call me of barney jokes!! Me: Hah! Barney! Megatron:*Glares at me* Thats it! Come here you! (Megatron chasing after me)Hahahaha! Good chapter though! ^_^ |