|Reviews for Twin Vice Paranormal Detectives|
| GiraffePanda2 5/3/13 . chapter 28
...Fred...Nox...FRED YOU'RE AN IDIOT! Agggghhhhh! ...Why didn't he kiss her back, dang it! It's shtupid. Anyway, REALLY LOVE YOU'RE STORY!
| GiraffePanda2 5/3/13 . chapter 23
I really love Nox's assistant. Like, he's my favorite character. It sucks that he might possibly be a bad guy though...
Anyway, YOU DESERVE A HUNDRED GOLD MEDALS! I never thought Fred could come back as a ghost, and then the whole Muggle thing. Brilliant! Brilliant! I LOVE IT! I do wish that there was a bit more... fluff between Fred and Nox, cuz it says FREDXOC but it's like, just now getting to that...
Buuuuttt, I'm not reaaaaallly complaining, cuz the plot and the storyline is so cool/awesome/epic/legit that i am fine with everything. I really love this story!
| Maran Zelde 3/30/13 . chapter 9
I just recently found out that my mother's maiden name is actually Cornish instead of English as I had always assumed, so this chapter's setting peeks my interest.
Nox may call herself a coward, but I think "normally cautious" is a better description. After all, not many people would dive into a murky swamp to save their business partner/friend from a mythological aquatic predator. It's hard to say what I would do in that situation, but I admit I would probably just stand there and scream for help.
Ran brings to mind a line from a cartoon I watched last night: "You're not gonna keep talking after we're dead, are you?" Is there some unwritten rule that all ghost children have to be annoying?
| NerdyAthlete 3/29/13 . chapter 28
You'd be a right prat if you forgot about this D': i love this story and this point in the story has to be the WORST part you could have left us here wondering what the hell is gonna happen between Nox and Fred ..i mean George and Luna has been satisfied...but ahh maybe it's just me...but it's been two years yet you've been on deviantart recently...i dnt understand? You're an amazing writer, there's no way you got writers block, I know you're busy with school and life and health...and if something completely horrid happened to you, then yeah I understand. But if not...what happened? This story is too real and too long to end short, you know? I know I can say there are a lot of people who are still checking every few days if by some miracle you've updated and there will be a 'chapter 29' to click on. Please? If it's an issue about not thinking you're a good writer that bullcrap! You're amazing, you've got probably hundreds of people in love with the story you've created. It's thought out and funny and original and you don't sugar coat your character. Nox is imperfect and that's what everyone loves about her! And the way you write her is why everyone loves this tale your beautiful mind has imagined! This story is amazing and I'm so sad to see it end like this...so prove me wrong and DON'T let it end like this. And let's pray to God you didn't die and are never going to read this for obvious reasons. :O ... But if you are alive and reading this...don't give up on this story. Please. 2 years is a long time, but I know if you update all of your ever-faithful readers will be here to finish reading this awesome story. ... best wishes. -NA
| Guest 3/27/13 . chapter 28
| wildcrazything 3/24/13 . chapter 28
please update this soon i love it
| TurtleWexler 3/16/13 . chapter 28
Oy! Where's the rest of this? You haven't updated in nearly a year! And you call yourself a writer. Pah!
Haha I'm only joking. Well, half-joking. Seriously... you ought to write more soon. I don't even know how I came upon this fanfiction now, it's been so long, but now that I've gotten this far, I might as well stick to it, yeah? So you should too. You've only got Envy and Lust left.
And I wanna see more George & Luna stuff! Come on-finish your Re-Fredding already!
| NerdyAthlete 3/13/13 . chapter 20
You said you weren't good at doing action scenes? Complete and total nonsense, that is chapter felt, I don't know, just REAL. This could really be a book on it's own, trust me. I'm being honest when I say you have J. literary easter-egg dropping in your writing! :) I'm utterly obsessed with this story and yeah, I haven't reviewed till now (the 20th chapter), and I know you made this in, what 2007? Yeah sorry, I just came across a TVPD commision and I was like, 'Who the hell is Nox?' so, being the curious person I am, I looked into the comments and found out it was a story on fanfiction, and I LOVE fanfiction, so i came and checked it out and thus my love for this story was born. GREAT JOB! :D and um...I have the weird suspicion that Viktor and Minos were gay for each other. IDK i got that feeling ... once again, wonderuful job you're an amazing writer! Update soon !:)
| FoolbyHeart 3/8/13 . chapter 14
Okay, had to read the bellatrix part, and the part with Fred and Nox :P Which means you'll be getting two reviews for this chapter! And after rereading my past reviews, I can't help but feel like they were a quite a bit random. They weren't exactly flowingly written, though I still hope you can understand them )
Oh, and I'd like to take this moment to let you know that I'm patiently waiting here, and wish you all the good luck with your studies and health. I'm a little sneak when it comes to checking up on people... I tend to read and everything, but hardly ever respond to something... I don't know, I never quite did that on the internet. Even now I hardly review stories, hence why I'm rereading this to review it properly - and because I really wanted to, of course ;)
So, take your time, and do things on your own pace. Otherwise writing won't be something you do for fun anymore, and that would be such a shame. Since you do it so wonderfully )
| FoolbyHeart 3/8/13 . chapter 13
Okay, last chapter for tonight, need to get up on time in the morning for my second day at work... damn...work... been a long time since I could actually say that XD well, sort off...
Dude...seriously loved this chapter. All the excitement! You don't suck at writing action scenes at all, I was totally picturing the whole scene in my head so easily thanks to your writing! Man, I wish it was raining outside so I could feel even more dragged in by it all... maybe I should reread it sometime when it is actually raining cats and dogs outside.
Oh boy, Nox now knows a little bit more. Ayayay, I didn't notice this before, but I love the hint to Rita at the end. I hate her, but she's such a great 'evil' character to use I think. Although Bellatrix sure wins the prize with that one though. Hmm, why is it that I mostly enjoy evil characters so much? Perhaps it's because it's often their motivations what drive them to do what they do, is what interests me. Hmm...well, off to bed... but damn, I want to read the part with Bella... urgh, inner conflict of interest here. haha
| FoolbyHeart 3/8/13 . chapter 12
It was so interesthing and sad at the same time to read the conversation between Ran and Fred, and Fred's thoughts about his death. And it's curious how he knows himself so well that he's too selfish to walk away from George, even though he knows George won't be able to move on this way. such a human flaw, that makes me love him so much more. )
And lol, somehow the hag reminds me of Smeagol XD
Ooh, no worries, the story makes perfect sense to me. I'm loving all the small hints you give throughout the chapters. Gives it that real detective-like feel to it. (again, guessing I'm using the incorrect words, argh, I'm losing my touch...probably should read and write some more in English to get back on the rails before it's too late)
| FoolbyHeart 3/8/13 . chapter 11
All of Luna's lines are always so interesthing. I doubt I'd be bored with anything she has to say, and I'm so amazed at how well you write her. It's like Luna hopped away from the HP books and burried herself in you story, cuddling away in the chapters. And it's so amusing to reread the scenes with Cathion now that I know he's Death.
| FoolbyHeart 3/8/13 . chapter 10
And I have returned (under a different name, but the same person nonetheless, though I doubt you'd remember me XD) Last night I just couldn't sleep, and I needed something good to read. Something I'd actually be able to read past the first two lines (which seems to be harder and harder on ff sadly) And so I picked up my phone and began reading this chapter, and damn, I couldn't stop, haha. I knew exactly what was going to happen after this chapter ended, so I cheated a little and continued to read a little more than I had first intended to do so.
I can't get enough of telling you how amazing the details are written in this story, seriously. And I'm pretty sure you don't get enough of hearing that :) so, I love the writing style and I absolutely adore the chosen scenery you use for your story. Not to mention the great characters of different people you use.
In this chapter I definitely enjoy the trio of Nox, Fred and Ran... oh and wow, it never stuck me before this much... but the conversation between Fred and Nox at the end about friends and such... just...wow. You really work on their relationship, building it slowly, but so strongly. (pretty sure I used the wrong words)
Oh and the whole Luna and George thing in here is sooo cute D
| Maran Zelde 3/5/13 . chapter 8
How do you pronounce Caithion Sidhe? I've been saying KAYTH-ee-on SID-dee, but I'm terrible with Gaelic names.
Anyway, I'm glad Luna made an appearance; hope to see more of her soon.
| xXhoustongalXx 3/5/13 . chapter 28
I know it's been abou two years since you've posted anything, but I really do hope you continue! I would like to finish a great story from beginning to end!