this was good.

Why do I not see this as the final defeat of Shredder...it just does not play out. The story has a lot of twists, and we still have the final showdown between Harry, "Albus", and Voldemort.

wow!

This was a cool idea and thanks for writing.

good story

good

Wow this is a really good story and am looking foreword to reading number seven sp please keep up the very good work and please have a great day.

Definitely one of my favorite stories! You did a great job in all of them, but you should take a look at some of the spelling and grammar. I can overlook those two things because of the way you have in telling what is happening.

You have a unique gift with all the stories you write. I just like to read, and am not much of a writer.

Great chapter, but there is one problem. Why did't Harry just use a silencing charm to protect Splinter, or use the bubble head charm to protect himself and the others from the gas?

I just love your stories!

You may need to work more on your spelling and grammar, but just reading your stories bring a little laughter in my life. I just love your sense of humor!

Wow, one hell of a fight. Why oh why did you kill off Theodore? What about Daphne? Is she dead as well? Harry will be pissed and feel so bad over that.
I hope Snape or someone finds the antidote to the poison in Harry's system soon.

Oh crap!

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

Did you have to go there?

Totally can't wait for more. Demon Dumbledore will die in this book, right?