Damn, this is pretty damn good, considering that several of the books hadn't been written when you wrote this. Very inventive.

that was also really good i really liked that one! one question if you ever get around to answering, i know this story was written just oer a decade ago so if you ever get online again please answer my question: was the book she was reading alanna: the first adventure? if not you should definately read it.

Well you must've been really bored to write this. I understood it but it wasn't a gripping story. In fact the main character was stuck up plus the Founders feud wouldn't have started over one insignificant little girl. That's all I have to say on the matter!

That was good. It's amazing what a family feud can get you, even if the family is your adopted family. Good work.

Who is this mysterious girl A.K.A. princess. Also a muggle born

most interesting. D i liked it a lot

Love it - love it love it love it! The founders are my favourite characters and this is such a beatifully written piece.

Wow. That's a new angle on it. Good job.

Very inventive and well-written. Excellent! I kept expecting it to be a teacher or a tangible person.

Oh my gosh! This is excellent! I could never write anything remotely close to this! This is so good and wonderfully written!

I love it. It must have taken alot of imagination. I wish I could write this well, some of the best ideas come when you are bored.

Cool. I like it a lot.

Original. Perhaps a bit dark for the setting, but interesting nonetheless.

OMG! You write so well, even when your bored! Not fair! This is a really creative, and exciting, and relates dircetly to Hogwart too!Cool Great job!

I love this! I'm so happy that I clicked on your profile when I read Flourish's reviews for part seven of her series (I have no idea of what the title is - I'm pretty clueless there.) Fresh ideas, wonderful story! Write on!