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| doctor's gal 1792 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOoh that was soo good!! Pete's bit was soo sad!! But I loved it! Great job! |
| Duchessa of Bellezza 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHehehe this was a gorgey little fic. Its such a great idea, and written so brilliantly. I love how you always get the Doctor SO perfect - its amazing. Great fic. |
| Dybdahl 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was the, sweetest, funniest Jack Harkness charming story. |
| flight815surviver 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusehehe I do, I sing disney songs n my chemical romance Last tim I was poorley I was singing house of wolves in my sleep. So cute at the end Jack is right they are adorable. aw lovly lobvly niceness |
| Ruby Scott 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseYour stories are just...blimey, I can't even find any words in my vocabulary that would do them justice! 'Blimey' will just have to do. Your writing inspires me. x x |
| Uh.yeah 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseGod, I really do love your writing. It's always amazing and special and... well, a joy to read. I really didn't want to put "a joy to read" but, um, I couldn't think of another way to phrase it. But it's still true. It is. ANYway. This fic. Wow. I always love fics where we have the other (especially minor) characters commenting on just how obvious the Doctor and Rose's love for one another is. It makes it so much real, because then, as a viewer, we can be like, "Yeah, it *was* obvious! Even the characters in the show agree!" Or is that just me? Anyway, it just gives their story a whole other level. And you managed it so, so well. I loved your choice of characters. Each one was able to offer a completely different and completely believable viewpoint and they all came together really well. Especially with the 'private' one added on the end. That just really reinforced it. In a highly squee-inducing way. What's especially impressive and awesome about this, though, is the narrative. It's in the third person, yet it effortlessly changes with each character and takes on their tone. Each one fits the character so, so well and it just *works*. So, yeah. I'm impressed. But that's not exactly new... And then there's just the beautiful way you write. Obviously, as I believe I've pointed out a million and one times before, it'd be impossible to quote back all the lines, because there are too many, yadda, yadda, yadda. However, I will say that "Less than two seconds have passed, but they are two seconds that could have cost them their hearts." particularly struck me. It's a tiny moment, with such huge implications and you phrased it perfectly. As you always do. So... well done. Thanks for writing and sharing and, um, yeah. I hereby reinstate the insane, borderline-stalker reviews. Sorry... |
| Emela 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAwwh this is really cute, kinda sad and emotional, but really good all the same! ^__^ x |
| The Chibi's Are Stalking Me 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha, love it! ^_^ |
| Venus Star2-com 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abusethat was exellent... i really miss rose and reading your story has made me smile...thank you rachel |
| OnlyTime 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely fantastic... again! Every character was written brilliantly, capturing not only their own thoughts but also various angles of the Doctor and Rose's relationship. This stopry really taps into the essence of the Doctor and Rose... that you really can't put your finger on just what their relationship is... and you have written it so beautifully and with such flare. Your Harry Potter mention really made me smile, it is now the norm for all people to make comparisons involve wizards and muggles... brilliant! Keep up the truly excellent work... I truly mean it when I say that you are a fantastic writer and your ability to write both believeable and gripping stories continues. You keep the Doctor and Rose together... thank you... and write many more equally brilliant stories soon please:) |
| victoriarosetimelord 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely fantastic! Brilliant writing and really good insights onto how they may be seen by others! *giggles* I've been told that I sing in my sleep...tis a good trait to have methinks... |
| TennantFangirl 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuse:D I love the last line :D total cuteness :D |
| Genne 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuse...If I haven't already put you on my fav authors list, than i must be incedbuly slow, or stupid..or both. The was blo0dy brilliant! I love the differeance between each of the POV's! and i chickled at the "like a wizard let loose in a muggle household" line, cute. ah, the whole thing was brilliant! |