thanks for posting... this was nice... the emotions are expressed...

this is such a sweet story. i love that you wrote it

That was a nice story there. Short and sweet. A really nice tender area that doesn't really have a lot of the danger present in so many other fics. This was quite relaxing just to read. And nicely put together as well. Thanks for posting it. ^_^

aw this is the perfect end *.* love how u wrote it

A beautiful little story, I really enjoyed it. Hoping to see more.

I'm right there with you, brother. Great little story, and from a wonderful, influential source. Even if based on NoDrogs amazing storyline, you wrote a fine tale, worthy of praise in it's own right. Good work.

Good job! A first KP fanfiction, an expansion of the “A Small Possibility” universe, and you got me to feel along with the characters. The characterizations also felt like Kim amd Shego, without stretching. Keep it up!

Ok I agree with ya on NoDrog´s way of writting Shego´s feelings towards Kim and her daughters.

This was actually a nice story, seemed like ya really thought about how it should be writen down.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

A very nice story...and another view of Shego that I truly enjoyed seeing.

This was a beutiful story. I almost cried a bit.

Very nice story, I really liked it. It had a warm and loving feeling to it but also a degree of believable realism and geniune heartfelt emotions. I hope you continue to write more stories like this in the future.

There are just two things I feel I should probably point out. The first is grammar which is the plague of everyone who uses this site, yours is pretty good but there were still a couple of minor mistakes (still a lot better than my first story though). The second is that you spelt Sheki wrong, it isn't Sheky. Still a very good one-shot.