Wow... Nicely written.

OMG! i love it! :3 HOPIN 4 ANOTHER CHAPPIE OR A SEQUEL
Its really good i can imagine juliet doin that!
please continue this story!!

It's really good, but I was looking at it with my Constructive Criticism hat on (it's actually a bandanna) and I was thinking if Juliet truly loved Artemis, even when she left she'd want Artemis to be happy.
But that's coming from a person who's never been in love.

O.o wired never thought Juliet would like him o well nice story Laura

the problem isnt the attitude...
its the brans, he needs someone who can last more than 10 minutes in a serious conversation

Interesting. This is the first Juliet/Artemis I've ever read, and it's good. Now you can choose to continue the story, where Juliet goes, what she does, how Artemis and Butler react when they find the letter, etc. Or you can stop where it is, and let your reader choose how it ends. It's nice either way.

was she going to run away or comit suicide? um... it was okay, but i think you do beter with comedy.