That was very sweet! I loved the concept of the unfaded ink being the unfaded love in Snape's heart :) You've got talent.

Sweet! I love it!

wow. really good.

*sob* I really liked this-made me all watery.

I know what you mean! After reading the 7th book I also felt like reading this type of fic ^__^ its so sad the story of Snape and Lily u__u

Aw, this was awesome. A. W. esome.

I ALWAYS wondered if he might have done that in his Potions book. It would be perfect. And the patronus *sigh* my poor Sevvie. I just want to cuddle the SHITE out of him. This was so wonderful. Do a long one. Show him in school pining after her! You could do one very well. You could show them being Potions partners and going to Slug Club together. He would be gazing at her slender white wrist as it stirs the cauldron, her dark red hair framing her face, and her green eyes smiling at him, with his "greedy expression." *claps hands and chants,* Do it! Do it!

Aw! My heart melted at the part of Snape. I feel so bad for him that his love was never returned! I like this story ^^ Dumbledores personality is perfect of course, confusing Severus. I liked the ending. (Btw: Think you can read my oneshot story "Those That Are Now Lost" Or something like that XD)

Aw. This was sweet. And Harry was extremely in character. Kudos.