Nice story!!

I loved this one shot. It was so cute. You made it so someone could think of it in a romantic or just friendship kind of way. =]

I loved the entire tone of this oneshot. I think it really fit Konan and Pein, they're just so serious and intense! You have them spot on. This is their relationship in my mind and you captured it perfectly.

I really loved that you gave a bit more depth to Pein and his respect for his members. I think there are moments where he see them as HIS members, like his kids. Ha, but maybe that's just me. :P

Anyway, I really loved this. Thank you!

This is wonderful, and insightful especially when I look at how you wrote it so early on, before more information came out. You HAVE to write more on these two, pairing or not, main characters or not (I'd love to see how this plays out in One of the Cool Kids.) because there aren't enough stories on Konan, and fewer written with talent and skill like this.

Always pleasing to read stories involving Pein.

holy effing cow. that was touching... I'm even crude when I'm being sensitive. isn't that nice? I'm sorry, I mean well. Please understand... you may be confused. Okay; This is a compliment.No one could have done a better job with this, I'm sure. Urgh, that was just so.. perfect. It was such a well-done fic. I wish I were more articulates so I could explain... I just feel utterly grateful for your updates. Thank you. Thank you for putting in effort, and POSTING this when you could have just as easily kept it to yourself or your friends or whatever, but this makes my day..

Aw... that's so sweet and so sad and so beautifully written. You're such a talented writer.

Wow...

Wow..This was really well written!! You used my favorite two Akatsuki too! ^^

*smiles* as expected from you. The use of words are very, very detailed and strong. The story was brief but its literary contents seemed to leave a great effect on the story. I loved the use of words and grammar but I never liked PeinxKonan even if the Naruto creator ended them together. Then again, I was glad I read it because of how you wrote it is very compelling and vibrant. I think you'd make a good author someday and I can't wait to read it! (even if I ended up tracing it back to icy Canada) *LOL*

wow...

This was awesome! This is how one-shots should be written! (It doesn't have to be this long or short, whichever way you look at it...)
Anyway, THIS IS SO AMAZING!

SO sweet! I love PainKonan, and you've kept it so In-character!! Love it!

The subtle way in which you showed the relationship of the two was excellent...

(...not to mention I've grown into an avid shipper of them with only 2 chapters of their appearance. Ahah.)

Beautifully written. -favorites-

my brain hurts.

great fiction.

10join
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