IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

i like it so far i actually read this back on quizilla a few months ago but then i lost it so i did a search on here and i found it again im happy now,YAY! okay anyways please update soon^^ byebye

That was awsome!

please! keep continuing your storie when you return! i really really like it!

nice chapter, i'm eager to know what happens next! update!

OMG! OMG! YOU ARE THE COOLEST! I am totaly reliving the episodes in a new way! AWSOME!
*smiles wide* Keep it up!

personally I think Kerin is adorable and thats its really cute how hiei is so nice to her and not anyone else. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible, THANKS

I have seen 1 or 2 other people do this where they rewrite the episodes with an oc. Really great! U must be watching the episodes cuz U have the quotes perfect! I feel like I`m rewatching the series! *sniff* I miss my boys!! I look forward to how she'll fit in Chapter Black and Three Kings. Keep it up and update! By the way it is hard 4 me to reveiw cuz I'm doin it on a PSP. *snort* Bye!

aw this story is absublutly adorabul! I loved it! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Kerin is a great character!! keep up the good work and update soon please! ^_^

Nice Chapter! i like the plot it 's really cool! i like your character kerin! also i like the way you make hiei care about someone but you still manange to keep him in character! keep writing! i wanna know what happens next!