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| senile old fogey 2008-02-04 ch 11, anon. | abuseOdd little story, I wonder if you will pursue a sequel...Not much to say, just that you focused very heavily on your OC. Not bad. |
| JWG 2007-12-23 ch 7,  | abuseA nice little tale and well done too. -JW |
| Six-string Samurai 2007-10-31 ch 11, | abuseGood stuff, really enjoyed the read. |
| Anonymous 2007-08-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseGuess you got tired of writing it, so tossed in the abrupt ending to get away. Ah well |
| Amberion 2007-08-21 ch 10, | abuseminor quibble: the espada were a group of adjuchas whose goal was to become vasto lordes, the highest form of menos hollow. They didn't become arrancar until Aizen used the hogyoku on them, allowing themselves to break their masks and bear zanpakuto. Now, if the spirit posessing happousai has been imprisoned in Jusenkyo for 1400 years, he cannot be an arrancar, as Aizen only recently obtained the hogyoku. There is speculation that it is possible for hollows to become arrancar on their own; this is mere speculation and there has been no proof in canon. As I said, minor quibble, I'm not too worried about it, excellent story, keep up the good work. :) |
| Rose1948 2007-08-20 ch 9, | abuseWow! This is getting thrilling! I just went back and read the previous eight chapters and then read this one. Simply awesome! |
| burgerbecky 2007-08-18 ch 9, | abuseAs always, your writing is great, the pacing is excellent and your story keeps making me come back for more. Bravo! |
| Dumbledork 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter. Loved the action. |
| Rose1948 2007-08-08 ch 7, | abuseWow! This just keeps getting better and better! |
| Dumbledork 2007-08-08 ch 7, | abuseExcellent. Nothing negative to say. |
| Dumbledork 2007-08-05 ch 6, | abuseAnother great chapter. Although I don't like Ranma/Akane stories I find this fic quite enjoyable. I love your ideas. |
| Viking Girl 2007-08-02 ch 5, | abuseSo Ranko won't get her full power until she accepts being female, and can't use her zanpakto's bankai until she gets over her fear of cats. Sucks to be her. Another great chapter, keep up the great work. |
| blackmamuth 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abusehow is possible that Ranma is not ready to deal the Nastyest jusenky cursed, when he had already done it? Ryouga is much better than Shampoo and mousse, and Genme is much better than ryouga. Also, Mousse is better than shampoo. |
| Wonderbee31 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abuseThis is looking to be very interesting,a nd I look forward to the outcome of the attack, and what happens with Akane because of it, though if she'd just kept her nose out of it, LOL. |
| Dumbledork 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abuseExcellent chapter. This story is so great, I can't get enough of it. |