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TheGodsCanDance
2008-08-22
ch 1,
abusei LOVE this! Where in the world did this tiny piece of beauty come from? It is so innocent and endearing and speaks of so many things that must have happened but went unnoticed in the telling of the Twilight Sagas.
Simply beautiful. Thank you!
book luver 2233
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abusetotally sweet.
twilight-is-lovee
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abusehaha.
awe, that was cute!
:)
Dancer of the Dark
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseaw! tht was awesome and really really sweet! i love how u showed how caring and actually intelligent he is while still making him emmett. not alot of people do tht. and the present? it was hilarious and really sweet and considerate at the same time! and, though its wierd (tht just makes it better though), i think it really shows how much he loves her. i, personally, would rather get a weird gift tht makes me laugh or remember some awesome moment rather than something expensive. just not all the time cause i hav to say, for a tree-hugging, nature loving, book reading freak i sure do love my material things. ESPECIALLY my computer!! i'd die without it. No joke. XD
Freaky Emo Goth Girl
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseu are a really good author. i hav read a few of ur stories and they are so sweet especially this one.
Evanescent17
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseAwez! This gave me the warm fuzzies. Wonderful job!
Stormey Winds
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was cute. The ending made me smile (not because it was the end, but because of what he wrote.) Great Job!
Mandy
2008-03-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw! That was so SWEET! It really does capture the pure and emotional relationship between Emmett and Bella as brother and sister. I truly do love it!! Honestly, this story really sounds like something that Emmett would do for Bella because it's affectionate, and yet hilarious at the same time!! Could you do something like this with Jasper?! I LOVE Jasper!!
Sarah G
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseIrritable Grizzly FTW
too cute!
VintageReminder
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseThat's so cute!!
Edward-is-hunky
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abusethats adorable
i really hate it when people make emmett out o be stupid
so i love that your story has emmett with some wit!
Alice Twin
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseIabsolutelyloveit! It'ssuchanEmmethingtodo. :DKeepitup!
Eli-the-Reader
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThis story wasabsolutely adorable. Loved how it was focused on Emmett. He's a wonderful character who nevergets enough time in the spotlight. Excellent job! -Eli
JasperisMYeverything
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abusewow. good idea!! really cute story!!
SunshineDaisies816
2007-08-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was very cute! And so totally something Emmett would do! lol.
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