NNO! DON'T MAKE YOLIE DIET HERSELF TO DEATH!

This is a very interesting story and I greatly enjoyed reading it. Some comments: You, like practically everyone on here, me included, need a beta reader, (I think that's the term.) Someone to read your stories before you post to check for spelling mistakes, clarity, etc. The subject matter is very complicated and mature, I applaud you for trying to tackle this subject. Did you do any research into eating disorders? Some aspects of Yolei's disorder didn't seem to ring true, compared to my knowledge of anorexia. You may be right, for I am no expert.

Your writing style is mature for your age, but sometimes seemed to not fit with the subject. The biggest problem, in my opinion, was clarity. The story seemed rushed at points. It was sometimes difficult to tell who was talking at points. Overall, I enjoyed it and encourage you to write more stories, please! I'm not trying to flame, I swear!

I HATE KENYAKO!ARGH!(TRIES TO PULL OUT SOME HAIRS BUT FAILED)great fic anyway.

One word, three syllables: terrific, or wonderful,or fantastic, , um, that wasn't right. Anywayz, great fic, I agree with your morals on dieting (not that I've ever tried it myself *looks around cautiously*. No, I've never used pills.) Yup, better stop. Ja!

I like it!

that was so sad! but it was cool of Selena! she's kewl! wat a great sis!

yolie went prep? ken went jock?

oh well. it was interesting.

Good story, but I ended up really disliking Yolie's sister, encouraging her to get contacts, to act shy, not stoping her dieting. I understand that it was all for the sake of Kenyako cuteness. And it was, cute that is.

Great story, I love it.

oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow!

It was a great fic! But, isn't Yolie/Miyako skinny in the show? Can you email me the answer? Well, Ja! leeki fangurl, rukimakino

Done readin'! Great ficcie! Okie...If this were one of my ficcies, Yolie would die. But, maybe Yolie should just learn her lesson, and eat healthier. Gotta read da next chapter! -leeki fangurl, rukimakino, 4 eva!

that was sooo gud! it was soo well written and had such a menaing to it it was really gud! i felt really bad for yolei so happy ken showed its what inside that counts not ur looks really gud fic!

aww, i like it! kawaii! _ i luv kenyako! _ prodigious job, ill be reading some of your others soon! :) JA NE!

That was really well done. I liked it very much.