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Lovely-Neko-Chan
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
I loved it.
Just wow.
I really like this pairing and i love the way you just described everything.
I wish i had more to say but i cant find words to describe :)
NejiKikyoAnimeRose
2008-08-20 . chapter 5
Hm, sequel...Yes please!! This was so great! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!! And I just love this pairing!
If you write a sequel, I'd like to see how things turn out between Lloyd and Kratos!
And besides that I just want more KratosZelos love!! >3
Luv ya, hun!
Lucy
2008-07-05 . chapter 5
That was a fantastic story. I saw basically nothing that happened in it coming. I didn't expect to like a Kratos/Zelos pairing, I didn't expect Mithos to have taken over Zelos body (which thoroughly improved the suicide aspect of the plot,) and I didn't expect Lloyd to use the word snog.

Really fantastic story. Thanks for posting it.
Goki
2008-06-15 . chapter 5
I really liked it, the characters weren't OC, it was a great KratosXZelos, thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed it!
Erian-chan
2008-03-05 . chapter 5
KAWAII! I loved the part were Kratos vulnerably asks for help, I was clutching my chest like, gods how much love is in that man. It was just so sweet.
If you ever write a sequel I would like to see Sheena's reaction to the news that Zelos and Kratos are in love ^^ and Lloyd needs to get together with Colette so he doesn't make an ass out of himself by denieying his father a little fun... and that just sounded wrong XD lol
but please write a sequel, I loved this fic and I can't wait to read more of your work :)
Bellena
2008-02-23 . chapter 5
I really, really liked this. Without your apologies about the pacing I would never have noticed that it was quick-- it seemed like a lot happened before your story started and it just reached a boiling point is all.

The one thing that bugged me was the introduction of character's ages whenever they were introduced-- we all at least have a general idea of how old the characters are in game, and we figured out with Seles' and Zelos' ages how much time has passed since the ending-- we don't need to be re-informed of the timeline whenever we meet characters.

Nice job overall. The idea if Mithos re-taking control of a character is a pretty creepy one :)
firedragongirl
2008-01-29 . chapter 5
OMG YES PLEASE SEQUEL XD Besides! Lloyd still hasn't forgiven Kratos yet! XD I thought that was really awesome, and when I was reading that, I really didn't expect him to say that after all that, but it was totally awesome, and yeah, I doubt that someone normal(? XD) like Lloyd would be into that stuff. XD I really love how you made the characters, though, and the situations they've been put in is awesome. Omg, Zelos going emo is so cool but really sad, but yeah. XD Wow~ Please make the sequel! PLEASE!
madame nonchalant
2007-12-30 . chapter 5
:D I liked this story. 'Bout time I found some good ToS fanfic! It was awesome.
Mare
2007-11-22 . chapter 5
Aw... I loved it! I'm not usually a Zelos/Kratos fan, but this was pretty awesome. I quite enjoyed it!

Happy writing to you!
Ryna-chan
2007-09-24 . chapter 5
...nah. This is too good standing by itself; a sequel is not worthy of it! XD

Ah...such a nice happy ending. :3 Ahaha, of course Mithos has to be the last "boss" lol

I may say; while I have read many stories like this before, the Lloyd reaction to Kratos and Zelos' relationship is very unique. I think you pulled an awesome job with Lloyd not even forgiving his father; too many authors make him sickingly understanding and kind! Like Colette! :O

Yes. Write more, lie less...ahahahah...I wish it had a more deeper theme of lies...oh well. :p
Kagerou Fuji
2007-09-24 . chapter 5
Oh my. I can't believe it's over. ._.;; I totally think you should write a sequel to this, and Kratos and Zelos are my favorite pairing in all of Tales of Symphonia. >w< You should totally write a sequel, and more KratosZelos. =D Keep up the good work!
Kat Loussier
2007-09-23 . chapter 5
Sequel, definitely. If you ever are in need of anything; feel free to ask. By the way, I need an opinion on a few stories of mine; and I was wondering if you would perhaps like to read them?

Loved the story.

Kat.
Magus
2007-09-23 . chapter 5
I would love to see a sequel. There're a few things I would like to know more about - where Mithos went, what happened to him, what's going to happen between Kratos and Lloyd and Kratos and Zelos.
Love the chapter!
Magus
nife
2007-09-22 . chapter 5
I think a sequel would be go, like finding out where Mithos went from there and what about the blooming love between Kratos and Zelos.
Ryna-chan
2007-09-10 . chapter 4
Second-to-last chapter, huh...? Hm, that's too bad. :s I thought this could run way longer than that. *shrug* To each his/her own.

Still...! Ze drama! Haha. Lloyd being angry about Zelos and Kratos is a little on the overused side, but then again, him being all happy about it is used too often as well. Meh.

Wow, I don't sound like a good reviewer. :O It's the stress I tells you, STRESS! XD
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