W.T.F?! :-O Who was the firstie anyhow...?!

Great story and very funny the part about Voldy.

The foreshadowing that Harry would transmogrify into Marcus was a smidgen obvious.

Infidel! The one true desert of the gods is the Sahara (on even numbered days. It's the Mojave on odd numbered days.) The one true dessert of the gods is rhubarb pie, not rhubarb crumble, with triple chocolate ice cream coming in a close second. For best results, serve rhubarb pie with triple chocolate ice cream (chocolate ice cream, with chocolate chips and a fudge swirl).

Characters are like kids - neither one listens to their creators.

Three cheers for Neville. Your interpretation of Molly and Ginny is VERY different from mine, but as Kipling said "nine and sixty ways of writing tribal lays, and every single one of them is right."

Black cats and broomsticks, Hermione talked BOTH her Dad and Fred into backing up her prank? When this is over, George will kneel at her feet, overwhelmed by her mastery of the Great and Ancient Art of Pranking. Logical that the magic draining keeps Harry from having magic used on him ... Merlin's beard dyed blue and doused with perfume, that's how Harry is going to defeat Voldyshorts. I kneel at your feet, overwhelmed by your plotting, albeit thoroughly underwhelmed by the SPAG errors. It's and its, honestly, man, and you call yourself a writer.

Good Hermione chapter, both her looking up Poppy's qualifications (and why and when) and her pulling a Weasley-worthy prank on Gred, er, Forge.

!Too much of a gentleman to kiss and tell, but reasonably priced photos!

A Pokemon reference - you snuck a Pokemon reference into an HP story.

Gotta be Tonks playing an elaborate joke. Makes me wish I had her abilities for causing mayhem :)

Very well done, sir. (Hat tip.)

I'd wondered about Marcus Stewart, but you'd so effectively whacked Harry it took me by surprise - and a pleasant one it was.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Best,
LWJ2

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Great story, lovely - although sometimes twisted - humour. The prank on George was superb.

I like your Neville; pretty much agree with your impressions of canon Ginny and never really cottoned on to Molly.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Best,
LWJ2

Very very very good fic and I loved the ending, how could you do that to us you arse. The fact you had me worried and believing Hermione married someone else when in the back of my head was screaming MARCUS IS HARRY since Luna said she saw him as her husband chapters back. You did a fantastic job with this story and I loved it from start to finish. The characters were relatable and very good the only dark cloud in this sunny day fic was the chapter with the stupid Quibbler weather story, Really you couldn't have come up with something better like an article about Nargles or something. Any way great fic and I really liked it alot.

nice i like it.